|Reviews for Semantics|
| tash 1/16/12 . chapter 4
sigh, you have an incredible talent. honestly, i don't think anyone else would be able to make sideswipe in a tutu, or the ark being overrun by furbies, or hell even the autobots as a herd of horses, as believable and natural as you can. your whimsy is wonderfully balanced with plausibility, and all the while you keep everyone in character. your perspective is always consistent, and your ideas are original. i was grinning ear to ear the entire read-not just because you updated, but because the story was genuinely a fun read. you bring something incredible and new to the fandom, and all i can say is thank you.
| Paleodex 1/16/12 . chapter 1
HO DEAR PRIMUS.
I have no words. I can't express how hilarious this was. Fantastic!
Will there be more? You haven't marked this as complete, which leads me to believe that there will be more. I can't imagine what Sideswipe (and/or Ratchet's) retaliation might be.
| Fianna9 1/16/12 . chapter 4
Prowl's revenge on Sideswipe initially seems over the top in , but he made a very good point about the danger of putting someone into a plastic miniature frame and selling them. It would have been extremely bad if the Decepticons had figured out what was going on or if the package had been crushed. All of them took this prank war to the extremes, but Ratchet especially should have known better than to do this.
| Knocks 1/16/12 . chapter 4
OMG! You're back! And this. This story.
No, seriously, I'm so glad you finished the story, and the outcome was perfect.
| Vivienne Grainger 1/16/12 . chapter 3
Look, it would save us all a lot of time and trouble if you, dear Author, could be persuaded to take over the running of the entire world. (And the entertainment value of daily life would very likely increase dramatically.) When can you start?
| Vivienne Grainger 1/16/12 . chapter 2
Prowl, in your hands, is truly, truly terrifying.
| Vivienne Grainger 1/16/12 . chapter 1
Can't believe that I did not review this when I read it the first time. Going to pass the story along to a friend. She'll love it.
| TheLandOfIce 1/16/12 . chapter 4
| Lambor Terror Lep 1/16/12 . chapter 3
This Story is so LMAO funny love this story keep up the good work.
| MoonWallker 1/16/12 . chapter 4
Amazing chapter. I adore how you describe Prowls character. Yes, he is the cool headed tactician but I enjoyed very much seeing how Sideswipe pushed his buttons to the limits. The thing I loved the most here is your ability to switch from humor to something much more serious and back. Bravo. :)
ps: Since this wasn't marked as completed I dearly hope there will be more. If so, I can barely wait :)
| Trickster91 1/16/12 . chapter 4
Just think...all of this could have been avoided if Sideswipe would've came to Prowl's office in the first place.
Well done. :)
| HappyPlace 1/16/12 . chapter 2
...You're a genius.
And I love you for that XD
| FunkyFish1991 1/16/12 . chapter 4
Well. Trust Sideswipe to up the game too far, and trust Prowl to get mega serious about it at the same time as being maniacally pleased with himself.
Jazz is right - Prowl is terrifying.
And I notice that this story is not marked as 'Complete', leading me to assume that you will be letting your loving readers in on some more shenanigans between Sideswipe and Prowl at some point. The question is this: has this event cowed Sideswipe's fun-loving propensity at all?
Another gripping read, and it's awesome to see this story updated again!
| Balrog Roike 1/16/12 . chapter 4
This chapter and the punishments were funny and I laughed/smirked, I'll give you that. But still...
While I admit that Sideswipe and Ratchet really went too far, I have to critizise that Prowl is in fact a little bit hypocritical, with his triple-shifts-disguised-as-Pluto-day-shifts and all. What if there's been a fight and Sideswipe would have been so exhausted physically and/or mentally that it would have meant his (and perhaps Sunstreaker's or anybody else's) death? Or scaring their CMO for life and perhaps causing trembling hands in an operation when he gets a flashback just because he looks at a black cable or something like that?
And identity theft and public humilitation isn't really the way to go either.
So sorry, while I understand why Prowl's so peeved and the danger of what could have happened - he's clearly crossed the border of justified retalition as well and even was the first to do so. Sideswipe's semantics where out of line and clearly disrespect towards a comanding officer, but Prowl's payback was already too harsh and too exxagerated in my opinion.
Given that this story isn't listed as "Completed" yet... is there a chance the next chapter will make him have to deal with that?
| MoonWallker 1/16/12 . chapter 3
Oh...OH! OH MY FRAGGIN' PRIMUS! Phuhahahahahahahahahahahahaha - amazing! XD XD XD