beuatifully written story...totally love it!

I really loved this story. I'm sad it's over... But oh man was it well done. More than that, it was good, truly good.

Beyond loved this chapter. If I loved the others then I adore this one. It was sweet how they introduced each other to their depared loved ones. Beyond touching.

Loved this chapter to pieces! To itsy bitsy pieces. Especially the night time preparations. It was cute, yet deeply moving. Special. Loved it.

I know I've read this before, but I don't think I reviewed... I love this story, I'm so glad I found it again. I love their first interaction and I love that Kakashi visited Iruka at the hospital. So cute!

This was such a great story. I'm so glad that you posted it all together. Your A/N belied the cohesiveness of the story; a very happy surprise. Great job on this. I loved the act of them running acting as a metaphor for their relationship...and to end with them bickering so competitively was perfect.

Great job on this! This is totally going in my favorites.

I admire the way you are able to portray them as men--not men as written by a woman. I think it's the straightforward communication style you give them, because being more confrontational about an issue or feeling is something I see as a male trait. Thank you for this story.

I love how you word emotions & write descriptions sensitively. Everything is so romantic! Thank you! :)

LOL!! The part where iruka got rid of Gai was hilarious!! xDD The dialogue was dealt with sensitively. I like how Iruka reminds kakashi of sunshine. Thank u for sharing! :)

the simplicity is enjoyable! :) Thank you for the sweetness & the dialogue

I love how you described & handled the shared moment of grief between kakashi & iruka. I loved the ending & everything was gentle & evenly paced. Thank you for sharing! :)

absolutely adorable

Wow this is fantastic! I love the idea of them meeting on a run and how you set it all up! I like how we saw it from both of their perspectives and how socially awkward you make kakashi and how forgiving but not forgetting Iruka is!

Great series! Glad Tsunade was willing to stand up for them if necessary. Loved the hospital bit where Kurenai was watching.

Great job with the story

rascal