This is another wonderful story that refines the original movie. "Two Deaths" actually made me like Serizawa's character. Since I was a child I never cared for him, he was that mean person who killed the fish and my beloved Godzilla. Even when I watched the movie again in my high school days, I could not relate to his character. Now I find him very interesting and want to hear more about him. You have definitely brought life to him through your powerful writing.

Pretty good. I never saw the Japanese version of the original movie, but this scene still is one of the best in movie history.

Sorry it took so long to get to this one, I don't go back on the archive but I'm glad I did! The scene in the movie had an impact, it had the feeling to it but this goes a lot further, its nice to know what Serizawa was thinking there, they really didn't give much on his feelings outside he didn't want the Oxygen Destroyer to be used and this give a good picture of what was going through his mind when he died. Now if only we knew what he would think of Destroyah.

Perhaps also, you should have mentioned about the fact that Dr. Serizawa did particpate in the war in some way since he did get that scar over his face during World War II in the Pacific, according to Ogata.

Other than that, a very good match and you definitely did attempt to ensure that you did not miss anyting from the movie itself although you might want to reword some of your sentences since it doesn't seem to match with what the movie was trying to state and what many of us have thought about over the years.

Other than that, very good job.

Nice and dark, you did a great job with this, I felt sorry for Godzilla.

I don't quite know what this oneshot was about, but I do know that this was very interesting. I found it to have extremely intricate detail and the scenery was very well described. Keep up the marvelous work!

Indeed, some of your best work. Excellent fic with great imagery, especially how you portrayed our favorite nutty professor, doc Serizawa.