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ilovecats86
2009-01-28 . chapter 4
Oh dear, wonderful meet-the-family encounters.
Would have been amusing to have had a few questions pressed, but very nice alternative X3
Deinde
2009-01-07 . chapter 4
oh my... poor Axel.
I love these! hope you continue them!
Stellar Eclipse
2008-07-17 . chapter 4
Oh god, that was funny! XD
Thatz
2007-12-16 . chapter 4
XD I read all of them. They are TOO cute. I loved them to no end. I really needed some fluffy stuff, and you totally came through.

:D

I'm watching this just incase you happen to add on a CloudLeon chapter. *coughinthintcough*

;D

~Thatz
Dark Flamingo
2007-06-28 . chapter 4
a perfect ending... and i must admit having to sit in front of all them would frighten me... you, know, through the nosebleed :]
Dark Flamingo
2007-06-28 . chapter 3
a perfect FFX-2 Yuna :] hilarious, made me smile :]
Dark Flamingo
2007-06-28 . chapter 1
lol, such a nice..cheerful drabble :] i absolutely love it :] and i think my sister has read books like those... >.
thehappyrain
2007-06-09 . chapter 4
LOLOLOL These stories are the BEST ever! They were seriously so funny and I loved how each story provided a tiny glimpse into each of these characters' lives--it really made the entire series as a whole richer, more relatable, and more loved. :D :D :D! I really hope you continue writing these drabbles because... they were really awesome. :D
darkchild
2007-06-07 . chapter 4
Please update as soon as possible, this story is really good^_^...
i-see-faeries
2007-06-03 . chapter 4
LMAO! This is really hilarious. I love it. ^^ Update soon!
Indiesin
2007-05-31 . chapter 4
I think I just died! ARHARHARHARHARHHARHARHHARHHARHARHARHARHAR!!
The 4th drabble just about killed me! Oh dear god... You write humour REALLY well, way better than a lot of people, you should write it more often. These were all VAIRVAIRVAIR funny, I kept choking I was laughing so hard!
foxy crimefighta
2007-05-16 . chapter 4
AWW. These are adorable, I especially love the last two. xDD
T3hTarotJoker
2007-05-12 . chapter 4
Me: because stoic, anti-social bastards r indeed that scary. me if i were axel; grab roku and get the ** outta there the moment cloud opens his mouth. i wudnt even stay 2 see if it wasnt gonna be blackmail.
Nezumi: cuz ure a cowardly authoress like that.
Me: plz. u wuda done the same thing.
Nezumi: ... *ends review*
kaie
2007-05-08 . chapter 4
These were really cool. :)
A Spot of Bother
2007-05-07 . chapter 4
*takes a moment to cackle at your disclaimer* Who... Ok, onto the review!

I think you did a pretty good job with characterization - AUs are always tricky, because they're obviously not quite the same people they were in the game, but I think you got across their personalities pretty well. And I love Axel's freak out. "Terrified, Mr. Strife, terrified as **." Not that he'd ever admit it to anyone but Roxas. And Riku likes to pretend he's got ice water in his veins - I'm pretty sure Sora would've been there with him, so why pretend? XD
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