mr. blunt doesnt say 'great'.he'd say 'good' or 'very well'...

ahh! please keep going!! i dont usually like sabina but if she's going to rescue alex then i guess she's ok.. haha. but please keep going!!

:D
great start
and a really cool idea!!
please continue... there aren't many alex/sabina stories out there
^-^

x

Interesting. I would never have thought of it, yet it makes perfect sence. Great idea!

i like the idea of sabina helping Alex and realy want to find out what happens to both of them!

:):):)

OMG. I hate Sabina, so right after I read the first sentence and saw Sabina was in it I skipped right to the end to tell you that. So, yeah.

I thought it was Sabina.. not Sabrina. Ah well, that was good. You may need a beta, though. You have a few errors. Unless you already have one, you may want to aske if they are feeling okay. If not, I'm right here, at your service.

Keep up the good work.

RG