 El Cuero 12/23/09 . chapter 1A funny little story in which some characters seem out of touch but none the less interesting to read. |
 LTAOZFAN 12/6/07 . chapter 1Hello. My first review of one of your fanfictions. (Tah Dah!) Anyway, considering that Ron is a bit foolish in this story, I think that the title should have been "Booby Trapped" instead.
It was also nice to see Kim exercise her sense of humor in this story. Keep writing, please. |
 FireStorm2K7 11/19/07 . chapter 1A very well done and very amusing story. I liked it, and keep up the good work. |
 Danny-171984 11/1/07 . chapter 1I don't know...the end sounded like this suppose to be a leasson...was that really the point? "Don't look at other girl's breast." I do have to say that this was an interesting story. I give you props for that.
Danny |
 Tragic warrior 6/26/07 . chapter 1Poor Ron, being tricked by his girlfriend for looking at other girls' breast. I highly doubt Kim never thought of certain body parts of other men. Good one-shot. if you ready any of my stories, review and tell me what you think. |
 CastaS 6/12/07 . chapter 1great shot, i enjoyed reading it. |
 hackmeister 5/30/07 . chapter 1It is really nice to know that there are still people who buy into stupid superficial stereotypes. Such people are guilty of perpetuating them, and they are also guilty of bringing down so many relationships due to the emphasis on appearance. This story reminds me of that one song Stupid Girl by Pink.
What happened to the mythical story of the Girl President?
She's dancing in a video next to 50 Cent
Stupid Girl
Stupid Girl |
 bigherb81 5/27/07 . chapter 1Hey there is nothing wrong with boobies. Great story nice take on the whole self confidence thing. Most girls don't have enough of it. |
 Midzst 5/23/07 . chapter 1you made me giggle. :) |
 forevermore2110 5/14/07 . chapter 1THis story rox! I love it! Great job. Keep those stories coming if you can. It was hilarious! |
 Sharksbean 5/6/07 . chapter 1ROTFLMAO THAT WAS HILARIOUS! I don't think anyne expected it to go that way lol! |
 Star-Eva01 5/3/07 . chapter 1Whitem:
This one I liked very much.
It can not be helped sometimes, us guys will look. My wife and I have a agreement. If they are going to put it out there to look at, I can look.
I have always been of the mind that if a woman is "showing" something, and I look, don't get mad at me for looking.
Kim's little 'get even' was really good.
Great story,
Star_Eva01 |
 Second daughter of Eve 5/3/07 . chapter 1That is so funny! |
 Lonestarr 5/2/07 . chapter 1Boobs, boobs, they're good for the heart...
Can't blame a guy for glancing...or staring. Ron's a sighted heterosexual male. You want miracles? Date an angel.
This was pretty good. I did kind of think that Kim would go through with it, such is the extent of her love. |
 Dutchman 5/2/07 . chapter 1Poor Ron. Somebody needs to tell Kim it's OK for a guy to look in the window of the restaurant so long he comes home to eat. OK - maybe a bad anology when the guy is a chef but...
Cute little story. Scratch that bunny behind the ears for me. |