Heh! That was really cute! A nicely written story for one of your short, earlier fics if I do say so myself. Sorry it was written from an experience though. Really good work...and I didn't notice any mistakes. :-)

that was a cute thing i lied it hehehehe really that was cute

cute :-)

Good Job, but why was it PG-13?

Good portrayal of the Mulder-Scully relationship with both mostly staying in character (bonus points for that :). It could stand a little more imagination in description, but besdies that, it is a nice little read. Reading in present tense was a little weird though. Still, nice little story. :)