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| JessicaSteenFan 2007-08-11 ch 8,  | abuseNice! Ari's twin. WOW. |
| JessicaSteenFan 2007-08-11 ch 6, | abusereally good... so exciting... by the way,what happened to jenny's hair? |
| Sophie 2007-08-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseDiNozzo looked up. “You mean where’re going to see Paul… I mean, Special Agent Cassidy?” Gibbs glanced over at DiNozzo. “Only if I shoot you and you go to heaven.” The Director smiled slyly. “Actually, Jethro, you will be seeing Special Agent Cassidy. She called me, said that she had a job that needed the best.” Gibbs put on his evil stare. “Why?” LOL. The best part. And the one with the color lights isn't bad either... But I thought Cassidy killed Nasir in Minimum Security... maybe I'm wrong... |
| Gibbsfan1 2007-05-11 ch 3, | abuseI really like your story. The pace and characterisation is really good. Keep it up and Hope to see more from you soon. Hope to also hear more from you on my stories. |
| ashy10rox 2007-05-09 ch 9, | abuseThats fine with me, I could only hope!! Well done! Hurry up and write that sequal. lol. I love it. |
| ashy10rox 2007-05-08 ch 8, | abuseWell done! Update soon!! JIBBS!! JIBBS!! |
| Liat1989 2007-05-08 ch 8, | abuseWow! That was unexpected. I take in this story Ziva wasn't close to Ari before he died since she didn't know they were twins, unless they were sperated at death. |
| phoenixphantasy 2007-05-07 ch 7, | abuseI love it! Please update as soon as you can! It's a great story, and I want to know what happenes! |
| Mrs.Scott323 2007-05-07 ch 7, | abuseGo Gibbs! *coughJibbscough* loved the chapter :) any chance there will be a Ziva/Daddy David confrontation soon? |
| ashy10rox 2007-05-07 ch 7, | abuseJIBBS!! JIBBS!! |
| Liat1989 2007-05-07 ch 7, | abuseGood story, except in chapter 6 I would think Ziva would've had a stronger reaction to her father wanting to kill her and the annoucement that she killed her half brother. Any chance of adding any Tiva? It always adds a nice touch. |
| louise1717 2007-05-06 ch 6, | abusedavid better watch out as gibbs said.please update soon .hope this means trouble for the team especially gibbs. |
| ashy10rox 2007-05-06 ch 6, | abuseJIBBS!! JIBBS!! JIBBS!! |
| watchthefan 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseHey man its George. I think you have done realy well for a first story. But there is one thing I dislike... the spelling it is the only thing I didn't like but hey there wasn't many mistakes. but in all this was a great read and i can't wait for you to bring out more chapters. P.S. You must not like DiNozzo verry much. |
| louise1717 2007-05-02 ch 3, | abuseoh ,i like the way this is going.love the fight scene. |