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achillies-eel
2008-05-01
ch 12,
abuseGood story. If you feel up to writing a sequel, I say go for it!
snaperules
2007-11-22
ch 12,
abuselove it please write more story
AliasCSINYFriendsER
2007-06-16
ch 12,
abuseAW!




That was just precious! Imagining Tony with a little baby girl! That would be so cute!




I LOVED THIS! Hoping for a sequel! ;o)



~mandi *_*
Fallonfan0909
2007-06-16
ch 12, anon.
abuseyes you should definatly do a sequal!
BlueTigress
2007-06-16
ch 12,
abuseGreat chapter!! Love it how Tony acts with Madison Mary Grace Dinozzo!! :D Sequel? :D Do you really have to ask?? :D
sn855850
2007-06-16
ch 12,
abuseGreat chapter. I cannot wait for the final chapters. I hope you can do something to put Kate and her Mom back together.
sn855850
2007-06-15
ch 11,
abuseOk, so now we know that Kate and the premie are ok for now. Tony's daughter is a 24 week gestation baby? I can't wait for your next chapter
AliasCSINYFriendsER
2007-06-15
ch 11,
abuseAw, I got a special thank you! :o) I feel so special! Thanks for that!! ;o)



I hope the baby is okay!




LOVE IT! More soon!


~mandi *_*
NavalHut
2007-06-15
ch 11,
abuseaw its a girl XD ! omg watabout kate?! is she ook?
BlueTigress
2007-06-14
ch 11,
abuseYeah!! Fight for your family Gibbs!! lol
That was scary at first with all the machines and stuff! So the baby's ok, but what about kate? Can't wait to read more!!
Sweet LIL loz
2007-06-14
ch 11,
abuseaw I like it sweet but not mushy thats cool i dont think in the sense of the story that it would have been right to have a really mushy scene
charlotte
2007-06-13
ch 2, anon.
abusediz stry iz really gd n iz written jus lke a proffesional. diz cud b da early wrk ov a vry soon 2 b famous young author.
sn855850
2007-06-09
ch 10,
abuseGreat story! I can't wait for an update
randomblueeydblonde
2007-06-09
ch 10,
abusethat was good...whens the next chapter coming??
AliasCSINYFriendsER
2007-06-08
ch 10,
abuseNO! Poor Kate and baby!


PLEASE let them be okay!





LOVE IT! More soon!


~mandi *_*
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