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stargirlsidle
2007-08-03
ch 7,
abusethis story was really great, thank you for ending it on a happy note!
destiny062
2007-07-15
ch 7,
abusethis was a really good story, i loved it, and am glad they got the SOB who hurt Sara. anyway i hope you write antoher one soon, as you clearly have the talent for it.

"CSI, especially fan fiction is a good distraction from reality."- destiny062
anonym
2007-07-14
ch 7, anon.
abuseGreat Story!
LOCISVU
2007-07-12
ch 7,
abuseI remember that episode.That was a funny one.
xbexyboox
2007-07-11
ch 7,
abuseLoved it!
The Smoose
2007-07-10
ch 7,
abuseThat was a fantastic ending! It totally rocked!
Stumpycat2002
2007-06-24
ch 6,
abusewoo hoo another great chapt

can't wait too see what else you have
instore.


Donna
ps hurry with an update
xxxsarasbutterflyxxx
2007-06-24
ch 6,
abusewow i can't wait for some more please update soon !!
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ayesha-s
2007-06-23
ch 6,
abusebrilliant!! looking forward to more!!
LOCISVU
2007-06-23
ch 6,
abuseI'm happy that Catherine became a good friend to Sara.
Gavi
2007-06-23
ch 6,
abuseGREAT!!I really love this story so please be hurry!
Thanks for sharing it!
bene
2007-06-23
ch 6,
abuseWaouh. I'm so glad to see your update.
I like the way Catherine is helping Sara.
Please continue and update soon.
Thank you.
The Smoose
2007-06-10
ch 5,
abuseOMG that was so good! You even made flashbacks! WOW!
LOCISVU
2007-06-09
ch 5,
abuseBastard!He's lucky I'm not there to kick his lights out!
live love and eat
2007-06-09
ch 5,
abuseI just read all 5 chapters that you have posted so far and I really like them.
I like how in this chapter you went back in forth between Sara's interview and Nick, Gill, and Greg talking through the scene. It definatly made it easier to visualize in my head.
I like the whole story line too. You make Sara seem real. Not everyone is strong enought to resist attack but she finds the strength to get out. It makes its very real. I really like your story. Update soon!
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