I found this story through the link on the TAS website, and I think, despite what you said about the theme being overdone, it's really interesting. It's simple, but drives the point home. But, -technically- 'total system failure. resetting.' is 2 sentences.^.~

Very good... pointiant (or however you spell that). Good job!
~Agent Malkere

Cool, An interesting take on Kaiba, comparing him with a malfunctioning machine. People have done this kinda thing before but for some reason this one caught my attention. It's sorta like his biological clock. Nice use of Pathetic Fallacy too. Aw, bless him. Kaiba is human God-damnit!