Wel !! - Other than throwing me for a loop in chapter 30 - I am sorry to say that this felt very soft as far as Snarry's go; IT WAS "still" reasonably well done. Definitely "worth" the time to read. I think/believe you said it was your first attempt at a fanfiction? You have got potential, keep going and good luck with your next endeavour "Beyond Words".

All in all this undertaking had a good storyline WITH a plot = gotta like and appreciate that aspect. I realize there is now a catagory for PWP/slash stories, but I enjoy seeing what the author's have fun creating. This story had interesting things happening (I liked the snowball fight). I happen to like seeing Sev. lighten up once in a while.

I know a lot of readers do not appreciate A/N in the story area - personally, I enjoy them. I also enjoy reading what other reviewers opinions are unless it is to simply say "Gee, I just love this story!" = duh!! Or the ever evident "Up-date soon, please!". Guess I should really shut up about those style of reviews; as they at least indicate that someone has read the story. OK, so I'm being mouthy in me corner today = happens some days.

Going on to have a peak at "Beyond Words". DO have a great day and thanks for sharing.

omg - you have no idea the shade of blue the air was around my computer screen in the last few moments (due to the names I was calling you the author; not polite in any manner nor form) = NO WAY may author's kill off Snape - I was just roaring along with expelled emotion. LOL. Had to read part of the next chapter before I scooted back to review (had to find out if I had to track you down with my owl to send howlers).

Phew !! Well that got the blood pumping, my friend. I would admonish you by saying: "DON'T DO THAT damn it!!" However, I think you got the result you where trying for, plus it got me to review - lol. Was going to review at end of the story anyways, but that "SCENE" just hit me "HARD" all of a sudden - CONGRATULATIONS. Well done. Thanks for sharing and DO have a great day. *reader/review sits and takes a breath while shaking head*.

awesome story lov it the plot is uberly awesome ever throught of a sequel? anyway love it through and through keep up the awesome work

Wow. Another brillant story from you!
I loved the sensualtity of the flirting and of course, all the sarcasm and jokes.
It was amazing!
Keep writing!
Love Heart

Bravo! Another mind blowing snarry. Its an art really. You had me in tears at the thought of Severus dying. Great job!
:D

This story was ok. It had it's funny moments, but there were also times when it was just overly dramatic.
The grammer was good, the plot seemed well thought out, and other then some slight sickeningly sweet moments, I thought it was very well written.
Hope to read more from you in the future.

eyes...burning...ouch...
i just read this whole story in 6 hours. Now that i have discovered your writing I can not get enough. Thank you for posting this story. I got really worried when Severus "died" and I am really happy that you let him live. If not, I would have had to reach through the confines of the internet and hurt you... so now you are safe.

LOL The tuning of Snape's piano.
And getting an earring :)

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Hehe, truce.

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And random meetings which hardly accomplish anything cause they're too busy fighting :)

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Hehe, Harry do you take Snape's owl to be your lawfully wedded wife/husband?
Harry can never resist being a nosey... Person.
Poor Sev. And Harry the stupid idiot moves... And apparates into an occupided toilet stall.

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Dumble's office again -.-
Dueling club, now THIS is an idea I like. :D

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Hehe Orange hair ^^
LOL Howler. That's what you get when you stupidly brawl in public.

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Why is Harry in a gay karoke bar reading gay books and looking at gay porn in public?
Is Snape just stalking him or did he decide to join the gay media library too?
These two are more 'reading porn in the dark' kind of people... :S

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Oh god... --Backs away slowly from the scary dancing and singing Harry--
Peopl are going to be having sex or be naked or something aren't they? No. That would be the dirty lyrics section -.-

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