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| charlie-becks 2008-09-29 ch 8,  | abusethis was a great story an i really don't want it to end, so please write a sequel, pretty please with a cherry on top :D |
| Marcus1233 2008-09-14 ch 8, | abuseHey, he can sleep again. Lucky bugger, now I have to content myself with imaginings of what had happened. Sleep would be harder to attain now. It was an enjoyable read. Thanks for that. |
| Marcus1233 2008-09-14 ch 7, | abuse(chuckles) I really am getting pumped from all of this action. And torn, knowing that it is completed and I would cross that line as well in the next chapter. |
| Marcus1233 2008-09-14 ch 5, | abuse(chuckles) Best chapter I've read so far. Impish Potter. Woe befall on the mortals he would find interesting to play minds with. (chuckles) Aww, how sweet. A flustered Death and an inferior cmplex witch who's craving attention. (chuckles) They would go nicely with each other. This would definitely would go into my list of favourites. By the by, I thought there were more Deaths around to collect souls? What about Clarence? My favourite bit would be when Harry's vexed and screamed for Death. |
| Marcus1233 2008-09-14 ch 4, | abuseWicked! (eyes glimmering with excitement) I mean, it sucks for Davies to be the one to die in Harry's hands. But looking on the bright side, he won't remember dying. Plus, Harry in murder mode is cool. (chuckles) |
| Marcus1233 2008-09-14 ch 3, | abuseOkay, now, you're shifting back on track. (chuckles) |
| Marcus1233 2008-09-14 ch 2, | abuseHow are with criticism? I hope you're not the type who shy away from it and act all in denial and go 'screw you, I'm great'. (chuckles) I like your stories, I told you that. You're good in the fluff area, and better when it comes to explaining in great details when it comes to actions and magic. I have to confess though. Harry with all the mushy thing of death talks with clients...err, charges, whichever works, well..it's not your thing. I tried to read it again, it tasted awkward on the tongue. Still a good plot though. |
| Marcus1233 2008-09-14 ch 1, | abuseWell, this is quite different from all the stories (your work) that I've read thus far. But I'm sure it'll still be a good read for me. |
| WouldYouLikeAChallenge 2008-09-02 ch 1, | abuseloved it! thanks for writing! i love all your stories, i hope you update them soon! if you need any ideas message me! |
| Lientjuhh 2008-08-29 ch 8, | abuseGreat story... Well done... ;) |
| calileane 2008-08-19 ch 8, | abuseSometimes, some fiction seems to be like real episodes of the series they're writen from. This is one of them. Your story could have been like what we watch on TV. And the crossovers really are wonderfully done. All is a choroegraphy perfectly writen. I came, i read, and i loved... (hoping that i have writen the good words, my english isn't yet what i would want it to be). |
| phoenixdragonsphinx 2008-08-01 ch 8, | abusewonderful! |
| gabrieldarke 2008-07-11 ch 8, | abuseaw... such a cute ending...perfect for this fic... i loved it... later! |
| yaoifanboy 2008-07-08 ch 8, | abusethis story was fricken amazing i give you mad props. |
| Of-butterbeer-and-frogs 2008-07-06 ch 8, | abuseAw, such a cute ending! Thanks for this fic, it made me smile. Cheers! |