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| poket 2008-10-10 ch 9,  | abuseKeep on going... The idea of teacher and student between Itachi and Sakura is always good. Although your story seems hurried and many spelling mistakes. I'm sorry for Tenten, but I liked how you surprised me there. I expect more ItaSaku though. |
| k92littlered 2008-06-24 ch 9, | abusenot bad. i kinda like it. |
| blossomheartxoxo 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusecute write more ^^ |
| jaimie 2008-03-29 ch 9, anon. | abusethis is getting interesting.** NEJI!IN YOUR STORY YOU SHOULD MAKE NEJI GET HURT IN SOME PAINFUL AND TERRIBLE WAY LIKE . . .GETTING IN A CAR ACCIEDENT OR GETTING THE CRAP BEAT OUT OF HIM!(LAUGHING EVILLY)!UPDATE SOON! |
| BloodChildOfHate 2008-03-29 ch 9, | abuseplease update soon^_^! |
| zero's vampire 2008-03-28 ch 9, | abuseplz update soon! it is really great and i am serious because of everything going on between everyone in the fanfic |
| brebre 2008-03-25 ch 4, anon. | abuseOmg as soon as i started reading the song from fall out boy for chapter 4 i started laughing i was listening to the exact same song, and when i rea 'he tastes like you only sweeter' i heard it x] this story is really good so far *i'm still reading it* but you have a few grammar mistakes here and there, like forgeting to put 'course' in a sentance like 'of (inset the word course) i did send it' |
| angeleyes20876 2008-03-24 ch 9, | abusegreat chapter.keep up the good work |
| JAIMIE 2008-01-27 ch 8, anon. | abuseTHAT ** NEJI THAT HOW DARE HE HURT POOR TENTEN LIKE THAT!SCREW THAT SON OF A **!WELL ANYWAY PLEASE KEEP WRITING I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!YOUR FANFICS HAVE ME HOOKED!!^-^ |
| Narutoavarillavignefan 2007-12-23 ch 2, | abusewow! good so far! |
| Alucard's-Master 2007-11-13 ch 8, | abuseAlsome! Please update soon! |
| kiwadoi seiitsu 2007-11-07 ch 8, | abuseUPDATE ONEGAI^_^ |
| crimsonkunoichi13 2007-11-02 ch 5, | abuseokay... you need a beta... the first few chapters were very annoying to read because of the spelling and grammr errors... you have a good plot and you should try to clear the personalities of your characters. |
| marissa 2007-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am R+Ring |
| millenniumsnow 2007-09-21 ch 8, | abuseplease please please continue!! ^_^ |