oh my goodness, where is the rest? there MUST be more. MUST. right?

well im back and still waiting. Hope u are going to continue this.

fantastic what more can i say. write more or i'll be back to bug u.

Hello, I am the author of this fan fic and it seems I have been mistaken. The dog's name is Horace ,but in the show when Ares first saw the dog he thought it was a horse...sorry for my mistake and I hope to have the next chapter out soon. Thanks for all your support.

Very interesting story. One thing, I think the dog's name was Horace, not Horse.

its intresting,where is the rest? i wanna see what happens to them IF Xena drinks the potion.

First of all, the dog's name was Horace, not Horse. Secondly, writing style was very choppy and awkward. Here's a tip: when you're writing a story, try not to ping-pong between a third-person narrative and a screenplay. It interrupts the flow. Third, the characterizations were way off, especially in the first chapter. Ares sounded like a fifteen year old not getting his way. And you make Xena and Gabrielle seem like love-struck bimbos. The story's got a lot of potential, and you write well enough, but I think you need to get a beta reader.

ok, i'm going to be honest with you. i think the love potion idea is really great, except all the lesbian stuff with Xena and Gabrielle REALLY grosses me out! other than that, i think it's a really cool story! : )

I'm not really into slash, but this sounds like a good opening for a continuing story. More please!

Ohhhhhhh...I like this a lot