Whoow u right its a bit slow,hey could u put some taang moment inside the story?

looks good keep it up!

Okay, I'm confused about one thing, other than that it's good. But, is Toph blind or not?

AW! She realized Douche-bag Mcgee didnt love her and Zuko does! HOW AWOSOME IS THIS?! too awsome! lol update real soon!

lol, its ok! You don't even have to listen to me! lol

I like it! It's sweet!

Chigirl

I a Kataang fan and I usually never read Zutara stories but this one is alright.Keep up the good work!

Katara is way OOC.

She'd definitely be a keener in school and if you're going to say she's pregnant with Jet's child? I'm going to need a rational explanation. She's a bright girl and in the canon she's a co-obstetrician. Not to mention, when she sees JEt being a dick, she calls him on it.

You haven't even justified their relationship or provided any particular reason why Katara would be having sex with Jet, much less sex without like eight different kinds of birth control.

modern twist.. very differnet but still good

got my attention love to know more
so intreging

I think you should slow down a bit, the story is too fast-paced.

Also, don't rely on dialogue that much. Add more narration to depict how the characters are moving or feeling. That helps smoothing the fic.

Other than that, good.

Great chapter! I can't wait for the rest!

Katara's sort of Ooc but other then that its interesting, I hope you update soon so I can see what happens!

A bit too many breaks and not as descriptive as it can be, but besides that it's interesting so far! I'm looking forward to how this story develops.

Interesting! Cant wait to see wait happens!