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allison
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
omg! i usually don't like ocs but i love this! why haven't you updated this fic?!?!?!?!! what is taking so long?!?! i am going to bookmark this page and hope you finish it sometime soon!
Persephoniii
2008-04-24 . chapter 1
I have no idea why this fic only has ONE review, but it has one of the best (certainly one of the more interesting) OC's I've seen in a while. The way you characterized Usagi, (and even the name itself!!) is intriguing. Not only that, but you've got me wondering just who exactly Usagi IS. Obviously she's an Uchiha, but how did she come to be? How is it that she is a member of the Mist village? So many questions!

You've captured everyones character PERFECTLY. Kisame, (who usually isn't given much screen time in fanfiction when Itachi is around) was done brilliantly. Itachi too was very much in character...especially with his apparent lack of interest in the little jounin at the beginning...until he realized she had a Sharingan, that is.

I also liked the little glimpse into Sasuke's psyche. It makes sense that he would blow Sakura off...when his entire being dedicated to killing his brother. OFCOURSE he wouldn't want to be distracted.

I really hope you continue this fic. Honestly, it's better than most of the canon character fics out there. Do you have this on another site somewhere? With perhaps more chapters? If not, do you plan to continue with this fic one day? I hope so!
Jayfairchild
2007-05-06 . chapter 1
First Review! I am honored, you wright so well, can't wait to read more of all your amazing stories! Hum this one is very interesting, I can't help wondering what he wants with Usagi, maybe take her eyes, no idea?

The unworthy minion of Burnt-sama,
Jay-dono
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