Beautifully written. It's a short fic but well thought out, I love how the ending loops back to the title.

Cute.

really good

M.

Wow, this was so SWEET! XD
I can't say that I'm a fan of this pairing but oh well, I loved it. ^_^

Thumbs up.

Sweet.

aw!
I'm glad Ino didn't dump her, that would have sucked majorly
very sweet how she had been thinking about how she nearly lost Temari that day like that... *happy sigh*
great fic! ^_^

sweet story, i liked it a lot. i cant say inotema is my favourite pairing, but then again, i havent read very many. still, this was a great fic, and is definitely a positive reflection on the pairing. keep up the great work! ^^

This is very good, I really like all of your InoTemari Fics. Are they all linked?

I'm pretty sure this is the first time I've ever read this pairing and I really liked it, the way that you had them relate to each other was perfect. I'll have to check out this pairing more often and hope I can find other ones just as well written :)

xD That was great! I really like Ino/Tem pairings. And you're very good at descriving everything. Please write more!

I love it. For Ino, for Temari, and incidental other sand sibs. It's a well played, mature scene with insecurities that are hints of something more adolescent- but never seem to go away no matter how much we think we've killed our innocence... And now I'm rambling so I'll just go back to- Well done.

OH YAY! That was a great InoTema. I absolutely loved it. It was sexy and steamy and very visual. I loved that part! The misunderstanding was great-- it lead to a romantic ending! Hahaha. Good job! It stands great as a one shot. But I wouldn't mind if you extended it either. Please write more InoTema!

I started to read this I was like oh noes! but you wrote it very well