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Reviews For: Tonic

AngelWithHorns222
2007-05-06
ch 1,
abuselol! He makes her want to run in the rain naked, Nice. I love this Fan Fic, its steamy, passonate, and sweet. You have to write a sequal, like Natalie comes back to say she truly loves him and they live together forever. LOL, Idk I suck at writing **, but u could come up with something better.
fluffy2001
2007-05-03
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was so passionate, so steamy, so wonderful! I like how you intertwined the past scenes into the current naughty bits. Well done!
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