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| AngelWithHorns222 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuselol! He makes her want to run in the rain naked, Nice. I love this Fan Fic, its steamy, passonate, and sweet. You have to write a sequal, like Natalie comes back to say she truly loves him and they live together forever. LOL, Idk I suck at writing **, but u could come up with something better. |
| fluffy2001 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was so passionate, so steamy, so wonderful! I like how you intertwined the past scenes into the current naughty bits. Well done! |