Good to see people still writing Threshold fanfic. I love this first chapter and the story idea.

The characterization of the characters seems not quite tv-verse (but close enough I guess) but other than that I think you're doing a GREAT job!

Are you planning on writing more? I'd love for the story to be complete!

loved it! keep updating so i'll know how it turned out.

Aw, how sweet of him.

I like the premise. The bit at the gas station could have been fleshed out a bit more, but the premise is sound.

Looking forward to reading more.