Anna,

How could you! Killing off MP like that!

Sorry for not reviewing earlier but real life got in the way until now.

This is really angsty and sad. I wish it were otherwise but for your story to work it had to be this way.

This was a touching deathfic and I did like you having Jarod be a little bit more human by cursing. It shows a different side of him than what we've grown accustomed to.

Best,

Andrew

Hi AJeff,

That was so sad, but nicely done. You're such an emotional writer. Looking forward for more of your stories.

Mercy

Now that was fun! ... or something like that ... ;-)

A very bittersweet ending. I was waiting for the Centre to take her body and find out that she wasn't really dead. Too bad Jarad (and the others) has to be in so much pain.

Wendy

Finally, the last chapter. Congratulations! You didn't kill Jarod, but you still killed someone. (sobs) Nevertheless, it's a great story. I love the poem also.

Fantastic chapter!!
So sad, but great!! The poem is wonderful!!

I forgot to ask this in the previous review. Does blowing up the Centre will solve their problems? It's just a building. What is important is the people, the system & the database. Well, that's what I think.

You're always serious when you say angst, aren't you? You said you'll put the update in Missing Pieces. I'll be waiting for it.

AWW, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ DON'T LET PARKER DIE! UPDATE REALLY SOON!

#%&%@#@%! angst cliffhanger! Good chapter!

Anna,

Jarod's showing us the depth of his love for MP. I'm glad you're showing this side of him. He usually skirts around the edges rather than admit what he really feels about her.

Good job.

Regards,

Andrew

I hope she pulls through. You're keeping us on the edge of our seats.

Andrew

Great chapter!!
BUT it's so sad!
Can't wait for more!!

Hi AJeff,

This was such a depressing chapter. I hope that MP is wrong this time and she pulls through. Poor Jarod does not deserves to lose another loved one. This would just destroy him. Beautifully done. Please continue soon.

Mercy

This chapter was so sad. I loved her visit with Broots.

Wendy