 moonlight ookami 2009-11-04 . chapter 24please update again soon! i really like this story and cant wait for the next chapter. |
 fugu-chan 2009-11-03 . chapter 24I love this story! I just ran across it about 4 days ago and somehow have read through it all already. I really appreciate your attention to spelling and grammar- many people highly underestimate their importance!
Other than that, I think your plot is original and well-written, and the character development is thorough! Keep it up~
I take it Sakura isn't a medic in your story? If she were, she'd either have not gotten to this state, or she'd've used her inhuman pummeling powers to mash her father to a pulp by now...
I like your gentle, worried Sasuke. I don't think I've come across any like that in any other stories so far.
Anyway, I fully understand your comments about updating and all. College classes are beating me up too! I'm looking forward to where this story goes though : ) |
 ShiraSakura 2009-10-31 . chapter 24omg . this story so sad >.<
me crying D:
pls update<3
200 sub? :D |
 romantiscue 2009-10-26 . chapter 24Glad you're back. Good chapter. |
 ItaKure 2009-10-24 . chapter 24OMG! U hav 2 upd8 soon, seriously. Even though I havnt chekd my email in 4evr and ther4 hav tons of othr fanfic emails, I saw this fic in my inbox 2day n put all othrs aside. so plz update soon |
 Twisted Musalih 2009-10-24 . chapter 24It's really good. So well written I'm truly impress with ur writing skills. Update soon! |
 Gothic Saku-chan 2009-10-24 . chapter 24loved it |
 dailyangel 2009-10-24 . chapter 24yay your back ^^
i feel so sorry for sakura and hope that she will get the help she deserves now. i'm not fond of sasuke in the anime,but he's a sweetheart in your fic and i can't imagine he'd let her walk out again after seeing her like this. no...he must help her..and i like the hint at that naru-chan,kakashi and gaara will be involved in her helping...maybe cut of her fathers balls and feed them to him, cut every part of his skin...hm...bit gruesome >.<
or maybe sakura will be the one to stand up to him in the end, with their help ^^
you always keep me curious with your writing :D its fantastic and i aint saying that because your my imouto-chan. your a fantastic writer and deserve much more credit then you get. i have always been a fan of your work and you only continue to grow stronger and stronger, both in person and fics :)
i really look forward to the time when sakura will finally get help, hopefully...with going to sasuke she's finally ready to accept it to, that's the hardest part...not asking for help...but accepting it ^^
anyway, i'm looking forward to the new chapter and amazing work as always ^^ |
 FreedomIsPirateKey 2009-08-21 . chapter 8waa~ i teared up a little at the father daughter scene kakashi and sakura shared plus the music im listening to doesnt help... |
 YuKiOnA-Ga 2009-07-11 . chapter 1i know this is only on the first chapter but that is only because i'm reading it over. i've read what you've written, and i love the way you express the change in Sakura's attitute, it's great. Although...i'm a bit confused with a few things. Sakura's father was gone for years, correct? And then he just showed up? Okay, well, i was wondering why Sakura doesn't sneak back inside for a few more things. He has to leave sometime, does he not? The food in her house must dissappear sooner or later. And, while i'm at it, when do Naruto and Kakashi find out about all her problems? I was thinking, something i only do every now and again(lol), that Sakura should...come to training beat up and hurt. And no matter how much they ask she doesn't tell them who hurt her. Then they should follow her and see her on her rooftop, crying in Gaara arms. He should see them, and motion them closer. He should pin Sakura to him and make her tell them about everything that's wrong. But...this is me and i know you probably don't want my ideas ruining yours, do you? I love the story, keep up the good work, don't let any flames get to you! Great job!
Yukiona Ga |
 shadow-binder 2009-04-16 . chapter 23awesome and sad... hope you can post the next chapter soon...
=^^= |
 starlit.kiss7 2009-02-17 . chapter 23so you need to update this ASAP cuz i NED to knoe what happens
i hope its not her dad and if it is i hope Gaara comes to the rescue! PLEASE UPDATE!?? (L) |
 Saints amoung Angels 2009-02-13 . chapter 23This chapter was really good and I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens with the story. Keep up the good work, and I didn't see any grammer or spelling errors. |
 YuKiOnA-Ga 2009-01-29 . chapter 23You're evil, you know? I love this story! UPDATE FASTER! |
 Gunbunny1 2009-01-21 . chapter 23It's a captivating story that draws you in. You really want to find out what happens to the characters and hope that Sakura will get help from her teammates. I really hope that you update again soon. You've caught my attention and I'd love to see what happens next! *grin* |