 Valen123456 2008-06-23 . chapter 3Well done ... you have brought this wonderful insight of Dalek-kind to a grand conlusion.
I am curious about how the last two episodes of Doctor Who are going to turn out ... it looks like Davros is going to come back but i have a strange little idea in my head that Caan and Davros are one and the same ... it would certainly explain his desire to maintain Dalek purity |
 morph 2008-06-22 . chapter 3Well done. The ending was exciting, yet horrific. I liked the little telepathic stuff between Sec and the Doctor. :) |
 Dalek's Avion and Theodore 2008-06-22 . chapter 3I am, forever in your debt Melora!
Thank you so much! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
OXOX
Dalek Avion |
 chaotic pink chocobo 2008-04-17 . chapter 2Interesting story, hope to see more! |
 Dalek's Avion and Theodore 2008-01-15 . chapter 2Grr! I want Gambit Part Three!
Please Melora! I'm begging you, please, just please finsh this story! For the good of Dalek kind everywhere!
You're brilliant Melora but PLEASE! Finish it please! |
 The Last Dalek 2007-10-25 . chapter 2 Please, please, please update soon! I REALLY wanna know what's going on inside Sec's head! UPDATE NOW! OR BE EXTERMINATED!
DO IT NOW!
please? |
 MichaelaLovesErik 2007-10-15 . chapter 2 Please, MM. I'm begging you. ((Gets on hands and knees)) Please, finish this story. It's too good to leave. Please!?
I'll make you cherry soufflee as a reward!
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 The Last Dalek 2007-09-27 . chapter 1 Dalek Sec has become my number one Dalek. A head of the Emperor and myself. This story is as good as all your Dalek POV's. I love it I love it I love it! Please tell me you'll continue this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
I'm sensing that maybe Lady Kalitharian did something to Sec, made him a bit insane. Could you please wrtite something about the Cult of Skaro and The Knights Tempus? Please. (I now I am demanding. Please feel free to abuse me.) |
 buchanchem 2007-09-16 . chapter 1great story, read the first one rift that was great to. when they first baugh in human dalek sec i was like 'maybe melora will write this one in his POV as well' lol hope you update soon :) |
 MongoolaLovesErik 2007-07-24 . chapter 2Another brilliant chapter! You show Sec's gradual transition from killer to peace keeper very well. Bravo!
Please update soon. Please!? |
 ryan macdonald 2007-07-08 . chapter 2 Good story thus far.
In chapter 1, I can easily understand Sec's disdain for U.S President Hoover's policies in trying to deal with the great depression. More importantly, I can see why Sec would make such a radical change in ideology at this point considering that his race is close to dying out. It is after all the logical thing to do.
In chapter 2, seeing Sec gradually become more and more human in his mindset as the chapter progresses is quite interesting. I can imagine that Caan, Jast and Thay are none too happy with his blasphemy (in their eyes).
It makes me sad that Sec will die and his dream of a human dalek race will die with him thanks to Caan's stubborn purist pride.
On a side note, good reference in having Sec state to the reader that at one time, he would have agreed with Hitler's viewpoints on racial purity. Everyone HAS been comparing the Daleks to the Nazis since they first appeared in the series after all... |
 morph 2007-07-08 . chapter 2I'm so happy you've updated! This chapter was wonderful. It made me very sad in some places because poor Sec has no idea of what's gong to happen to him. Some parts also amused me - mainly Caan when he was whining. It's so very sad and interesting to see him thinking about love and other such ideas that Daleks have never felt before. The fact that Sec feels sympathy for the Doctor losing Rose is very touching. So was when he ponders wether the Dalek embryos would have been his siblings or his offspring.
All in all, I enjoyed reading this chapter very much, and I'm eagerly waiting your next chapter! |
 big fan!!!! 2007-07-08 . chapter 2 I am happy that you have updated again Melora. You portray Sec exalently and it was a pitty he had to be killed in the show. Love the reference to Davros and the interaction between the Doctor and Sec. Please update soon! |
 Sauron-Pterodactyl 2007-07-06 . chapter 1 Very cool. I like the part with Sec's agonized thoughts during his transformation. I also love your characterisations of the rest of the Cult:
Thay is impulsive and brash, and as Sec's younger brother, he is the most loyal to him. He is worried about Sec's safety during his hybridisation.
Jast is the eldest, mainly working as maintenance and adviser to Sec. He shares some of Thay's worries about Sec's safety and health.
Caan is violent and rebellious. He is a firm believer in old Dalek ways and probably the most disgusted at Sec and his creativity. His treacherous nature is obvious when he immediately argues after hearing Sec's plan, and when he feels no pity for Sec during the transformation. |
 Dragon of Silver 2007-07-03 . chapter 1This is brillient. I love Sec and you've captured a really great mix of human and dalek characteristics in his voice. Well done. |