I think double reviews per chapter aren't allowed. That's why I'm not logged in.

Do you have any idea when you will be continuing this story? Because I would really like to see what happens next. I mean, the prologue asks for more. Well, I, among others, ask for more.

I really really hope to see more from this story since you have been updating other stories, but not this one.

I loved your chapter length and look forward to the next parts of your story.

I regret reading this. It's wonderful and I just want more! You've done a really good job portraying Mimi's emotions.

Actually, I love your Vincent stories in general. And your way of writing is very admirable.

I'm gonna put this on my story alerts, and hope that your hiatus ends soon D:

Ha... I took forever to review this one. Hehe... Sorry!

Anyway, as with all your writing, I love it.

Regarding the rating: I think that you can leave it at T, because in writing, T seems to allow for weightier matter anymore. I almost think the subject matter is enough to warrent an M, but at the same time... I've seen worse in the T rating, so I think it's fine to leave it as such. If someone complains, then you can bump it up, but until such an event occurs, I think it's perfectly fine the way it is.

Regarding the idea: I like it. It's a good challenge to give yourself, and it's one I'm fully confident you can pull off. (And you'd /better/ finish this thing, because I want to see where your twisted mind takes it! If you don't... I'll hunt you down and ... I don't know. Do something. Something /evil/... like make you play Dirge of Cerberus.)

The manner in which the one-night stand occurs seems a bit... random, in my mind. Then again, I know next to nothing about having had a bit to drink and getting my shirt sewn up only to get in bed with the seamstress. Still, it just... why? Was it just an impulse that he followed? Mimi's reasons, while muddled (which is understandable, as she's muddled, and this is from her point of view), are at least somewhat clear, but... well.

I guess my wee little teen-aged mind simply doesn't comprehend the sex drive and being drunk and the effects they have on each other. -shrugs- Oh well. I'll pretend like I do and go on my merry way.

Back to the writing itself, I love how you end this. The last sentance made me grin in a strange fashion. And the beginning of it, too... The playful banter and all - I reall like it.

What I don't like is that it's been three months since you posted this, and you haven't posted a first chapter. That saddens me, and I'm trying to guilt trip you into finishing the damn thing and posting.
-flails-

If you don't finish... -does best attempt to give looming, threatening, Vincent-esque glare... and doesn't really succeed, but we can pretend, can't we-

Love,

Snarky The Almost As Annoying As Yuffe On Speed

I think this could be very interesting...I'm intrigued to see where this goes.

Keep up the good work.

Wow, that was a good chapter. I'm not all into Vincent/OC romance. I think it's so not Vincent. I can't imagine Vincent to be happy in love with a belly full of butterflies. You get the point.

Anyways, I like the way you write. And it has the potential to become a good story. But only IF you don't make it cheesy and make Vincent OOC. I'll look forward to the next chapter and I'll decide if I'm going to read more of it or abandon it completely. I'll let you know.

Keep up the good work.

a daughter YEAHH!!

Very well written. Continue! Your explainations really bring character into your character, and I like your interpretation of Vincent prior to his incident.