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Sue 2008-01-01 ch 3, anon.	abuseThis was absolutely amazing! If only we could have seen this on the show. You captured Danny (and everything he must have been going through as he made his way to Montanta) brilliantly. I was going to quote my favourite part, but there were just too many. :) Congrats on an excellent job!
Marue61 2007-05-25 ch 3,	abuseWow, I totally missed this story until today (give thanks to Sugah's bubble). It has to be my favorite version of the trip to Montana. Right on track IMO. Great writing. Hope you have more in store for us.
NeoAddctee 2007-05-24 ch 3,	abuseOk now that is ADORABLE! ^^ I love danny and lindsay..
JennCorinthos 2007-05-21 ch 3,	abuseAWE! Absolutely Brilliant... I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVED IT! Amazing! JENNIFER
downrighteerie 2007-05-20 ch 1,	abuse“The body does funny things when it’s far from the heart.” Lovely, lovely, lovely work. You're just in Danny's head, and its so perfect. I read all of your (CSI:NY) work at least once a week, just to bask in your writing and the awesomeness of your portrayal Danny and Lindsay. Thank you for writing this, and I hope for many, many more fics from you.
LocoGreggo 2007-05-05 ch 3,	abuseAww so sweet. Way to go.
LocoGreggo 2007-05-05 ch 2,	abuseOh wow. LOL. This is good.
LocoGreggo 2007-05-05 ch 1,	abuseAwesome beginning. Wonderfully crafted.
cyko1003 2007-05-04 ch 3,	abuseThere are a very small group of authors who capture Danny and Lindsay as well as you do, and this fic is just another testament to that fact. Another fantastic story, and a great read for me. Love you stuff - there had best be more coming in the future! This piece was just wonderful - You got right inside Danny's head, his thoughts and actions completely in-character and so so SO wonderfully written. LOVE your work, loved this piece. Great job, as always! :)
rhrforever 2007-05-04 ch 3,	abuseOk, this is going in my Favourite Stories list...it was amazing!! Their emotions captured perfectly...I just loved it!
chili-peppers 2007-05-04 ch 3,	abuseOmg what an amazing fic!So beautiful. This is brilliant. Awesome job!
ReJo 2007-05-04 ch 3,	abuseThat is an amazing story. Your writing skills are phenomenal.
trustno1-1987 2007-05-04 ch 3,	abuseAbsolutely fantastic story. I love how you combine humor, angst and fluff seamlessly, in Danny's thoughts and other characters' words. Your style is wonderful for mirroring Danny's thoughts: face-paced when he's remembering his past, flying around the country; the shorter sentences as he's talking to Charlie in the beginning emphaising his feeling trapped; the flowing sentences when he's thinking about Lindsay. I love how what we've seen of Danny on CSI before he went to Montana is explained, like here: “She’s everywhere. She’s on every sidewalk. Every subway. In the halls. Elevators. Labs. She’s under my skin. I was so bent on hating her, that I was completely blindsided. There’s this empty place in my chest, and it hurts, you know? This is crazy.” Again, the style is lovely; straight to the point, simple, but emphatic and filled with emotion. Lindsay's phone call is really well written as well - I love to think that she's keeping in touch with him while she's away. "She made her way determinedly past the families and the friends, the prosecution and the defense, closing the short distance between them in the space of a moment, hugging him with such force he almost stumbled back, wrapping his arms tightly around her shoulders, holding her against him comfortably, cradling her head to his chest, feeling the damp of her tears through his shirt. Her arms wove around his middle, tightening around his waist with a pressure that squeezed his heart." I adore this paragraph (and everything after that, but I'd end up quoting everything from the latter of ch.3). I can really see that as I read it, and the kiss at the end is just beautiful.
xxBuffyfreakxx 2007-05-04 ch 3,	abuseGreat work. This was a great story. :D
mel60 2007-05-03 ch 3,	abuseExquisite! Holy **! I'm a little speechless - which is probably a relief, considering how long-winded and rambling I usually am. "...pulling out onto the 209 and closing the distance between his body and his heart." How do you do it? It's so amazing, I just don't get how you do it? I'm so envious of your writing. You are fabulous!

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