ooh, all the relationships in this fic seem so tangled and murky. As much as Riku/Kairi squicked me out, I'm looking forward to seeing Sora cut the cord with her and live happily ever after with Riku. :)

Um, what I have to say is, I'm really happy you haven't given up on this story! And the only other thing I have to say about this chapter is, lol, Wow...

I knew it!! I knew it was Seifer ever since that time that you wrote something about him giving Leon a scar!HA!
ahem...anyway...UPDATE S00N!!

Ahh I LIKE Leon, and I do NOT like Seph. Evil woman.. however I am of fan of Seifer and Squall. Have you read Protecting the lion? WONDERFUL story. I was a little iffy on the Mpreg for this story but it fits in nicely I hope you'll update soon.
Wildfire

What do you mean this chapter was long enough. It totally wasn't. I'm so excited now to see what happens next!

Lol i love Riku and Rikku- both so optimistic

O yummy! I'll take a Reno covered strawberry sauce also! XD
loving the story

Loys O' Love
-Azzy

YAY OMG you updated! (dances around happily) I love this fic and I've been hoping you'd update it soon. Glad you did. I don't mind the length of the chapter, seems wonderful in my opinion.

Love the Sora Axel telephone conversation, it was just a bunch of fun. I'm interested in what's happening next chapter, more chaos? More drama? Or more fun? Or all three? lol, I guess I just have to wait and find out huh?

- Chro

I'm to nervous about Sora's girlfriend to read properly ^^ but the bits of the chapter I read was great :P keep it up :D:D

Oh hell... It just keeps gettin' better. The drama. lol!
Sora needs to do some serious thinking or well, just realize how he feels. Talk about slow.

Bad bad leon for cheating on cloud. Who'd wanna do that anyway? I certainly hope they patch things up, meaning cloud and leon, and that sephiroth would just somehow miracously dissapear. Normally i can... ... tolerate him, but f**k he annoys the ** outta me in this story! He's acting like such an ** towards cloud!!

whew. feels muuch now i got that off my chest. So, i sincerly hope that it works out XD

Oh, And yay for an update! it has been much awaited! Though do it again, soon please!

Take care! byes

Aww hell... I dunno but sephiroth just annoys the ** outta me. God! Give up dude !!
And it's so sad cuz i really like the story but, it's like, poking me all the time...

Do update soon please :D

This is a really awesome story. You should really update soon, it's acutally one of the best mpreg fics that I've read in a long time.

update please...

I have to say that Sora is pretty stupid huh? I mean, he has a "girlfriend" he obviously doesn't think about in "that" way, and another "friend" which he does. But still he sticks with her... Without realuzing that he actually LOVES Riku!! Annoying XD I want Riku and Sora to be together!! And the fun part is that I'm reading this totally separate from the anime/book/series or whatever it is, I have no backstory what so ever ^^

I love this story! update soon!