Oh... God I loved this one

Did you like create this story to insanely well go along with the song "Little Wonders"? e__e'...
Eh, don' matter, tis quite awesome even if tis isn't reeally meh style. XDD Good work!! Keep it up!!

So Sweet. I think the relationship these two share is adorable, regardless of them being future parent/child.
Sometimes the forbidden fruits are the sweetest ones, or so it's said. I never really understood the meaning of that saying too well, now I think I do. Anyway, good job.

Good story.

It's so twisted and wrong an timecesty but I can't help but love it the way you've written it, so innocent and awkward.

Good work.

Yes! I loved it. So sweet. ^_^

Um... You know, I really DID like this couple before I even READ the fanfiction for MTR on this site, but while reading this, I got the whole 'it's disgusting' thing in my head, and yet, i stil liked this story! great job!

ok dude think about what you just wrote if you are a girl that would be like you falling in love with your mom and if you are a boy that would be like falling in love with your dad that is so wrong and dont rate this kind of slash K+ shheh

This was beyond sweet

Ah, I wasn't the only one who thought Wilbur/Lewis pair in MTR XD!! Gah...it's so wrong but to cute. If there was only other ways around it. Nice job in keeping them in characters XD

Oh! I never reviewed this one, even though I read it the first day you posted it! I'm sorry!

Now, what to say...? I'm dreadful at reviewing.

You're still my hero for writing this pairing. n_n I think I liked the first one better, but not because of quality, or anything. I just love implied pairings to death. x3 They seem to be terribly rare, sometimes, too.

Though, I did like this one, as well. I can't think of any serious complaints with it, either. I'd need to see the movie again to see how in-character it is, though...

I ought to watch that movie again, anyway.

Keep up the wonderful work!
~ Morgan

I never thought I could enjoy timecest so much XD

Aww, that's so good! I love you people who write yaoi for us people to scared to write it. :3 You take a risk, because some people would think it's gross. Doubly because there IS relation in it.

Great job. I hope more comes along.

I LOVE IT!
even though they aren't SUPPOSED to be together doesn't mean we can't dream! :-)

WHAT THE HELL...??!