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| dragons-syn 2007-06-21 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked what you have going here. Please post more I would like to see what happens to Pete and if a certain General, archealogist, and Jaffa have a little talk with the man. Absolutely entertaining! |
| stusue 2007-06-05 ch 4, | abuseI just came across this fic and loved it! I'm so glad little Emily's Jack's little girl ... but she's stuck with Pete's mother's name, which would always be a reminder. :o( But I can't believe it's complete! More! ... pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty please with sugar on top? :o) |
| nogigglingmajor 2007-05-29 ch 4, | abuseLoved it! want more! |
| 7 League Boots 2007-05-29 ch 4, | abuseWhew! Scared me there, dagnabit! Very well done story - nice little mystery and sweet resolution. Of course Jack beat out Pete - with the fastest microscopic 'Ancient' bugger in the human race! A bittersweet revelation for Sam, but glad Jack's in alt so they'll get through the obvious reality of missed time. "Sorry" may not cut it all the time, but it will with these two. Great read, thanks. |
| Little Miss Sci-Fi 2007-05-29 ch 4, | abuseVery good! I love it and cant wait to see more up soon!! |
| pain in the mikta 2007-05-28 ch 4, | abuseSWEET! :-) |
| BettyHall223 2007-05-28 ch 4, | abuseYes! This is great. Can't wait for more. |
| cess525 2007-05-28 ch 4, | abuseNow I look crazy because I read the last chapter then asked you for more in the reply and then saw my email said there was another chapter:D Awesome chapter...didn't see that coming! More please:D |
| Ilovesg1 2007-05-28 ch 4, | abuseYES...there is always that chance in a million. Too bad Petey boy couldn't be sent to a galaxy far, far, away. Oh, please let them shove it in the jerks face. |
| cess525 2007-05-28 ch 3, | abuse...OMG ... more please...pretty pretty please. |
| pain in the mikta 2007-05-28 ch 3, | abuseUh oh! INCOMING! 8-0 |
| Ilovesg1 2007-05-28 ch 3, | abuseThat, that, S.O.B...This story has taken on a life of it's own and I love every word. PS (Pond Scum) really thinks she is going to hand her over? Please update soon. |
| Little Miss Sci-Fi 2007-05-28 ch 3, | abuseAH what an interesting twist! hope to see more soon! |
| BettyHall223 2007-05-28 ch 3, | abuseTalk about a cliffhanger! How dare Pete show up and want his daughter. Of all the nerve! Another chapter, please . . . soon. |
| 7 League Boots 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseLovely capture, but bittersweet; there seems to be hope for them, at least I see it. Good characterizing for Sam and Jack. Two very sad words to sum up such a big mistake. Good read, thanks for sharing. |