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| PatryTrusky 2007-12-15 ch 15, | abuseI like it!Are there more chapters?I guess so but...I want you to updated lol! |
| Kaoli water goddess 2007-10-12 ch 15, | abuseHAha... now the queen b*s are like 'wtf?' They need to accept her like that. But they won't... which leaves Danny who's thinkin' 'Hell yeah!' |
| jordinajamaica 2007-10-12 ch 15, | abuseGREAT! Update soon please!!:D |
| Skylar87 2007-10-11 ch 15, | abusePLEASE TELL ME SHE'S GONNA LEAVE HIM AT THE ALTER! Please? Great story so far... can't wait for more (hint hint) ~Sky~ |
| chili-peppers 2007-10-02 ch 14, | abuseOMg!! you have to update now! lol I can't wait to see what she does! Great job! |
| 5t4c3y 2007-10-02 ch 14, | abuseYES! Please update soon :o) |
| Kaoli water goddess 2007-09-29 ch 14, | abuseOohh... that's exactly what she's gonna do! Hooray for big bros!! And what a fun way to escape the marshmellow, and to see who really loves Lindsay: Danny or Mr. Snobby... |
| Skylar87 2007-09-28 ch 14, | abusePlease tell me that she's going to humiliate that punk and leave him standing at the alter! And then she can be with Danny and all will be good :) Please update soon! ~Sky~ |
| Melface 2007-09-28 ch 14, | abuse*crosses fingers* Leave Peter at the altar, leave peter at the altar . . . . Kyahaha, marshmallow suit . . . keep it up! |
| Ze'eva Shacklebolt 2007-09-28 ch 14, | abuseHey, I'm liking this story. I think it might be better if you tried to right the speaking parts like speech i.e.I'll instead of I will, it just sounds a tad stilted at times. Good writing and a really creative idea though! ~Ze'eva |
| ReJo 2007-09-28 ch 14, | abuseYay! I can't wait until the next chapter! |
| scoj 2007-09-16 ch 13, | abuseI LOVE IT! please update soon, i have to know that she made the right choice! this is brilliant and well written. you have a real talent! |
| chili-peppers 2007-09-12 ch 13, | abuseOmg i can't believe Peter's mother did that! I would have hit er! Great chapter, so sad the next one is the last. |
| 5t4c3y 2007-09-09 ch 13, | abuseOh no no no no no no no no no! The next chapter can NOT be the last! This story is amazing! Can't wait for more. Please update soon :o) |
| twinkeyrocks 2007-09-08 ch 13, | abuseFirst off I would kill my mother in law if she ever tried to do that. And secondly please let Danny and Lindsay end up together. |