good

That was so romantic and beautiful it's one of those storys that make you smiled and feel warm inside. I like it alot.

Oh, so very sad, but so well-written. I think it was a brilliant touch to have Gaara not confess love to Hinata because he doesn't know what it is, but to return her compliment by calling her beautiful.

This is gorgeous. The first time I read it I was actually listening to Avril's Lavigne's "Slipped Away" and wow, did this break my heart. You can feel Hinata's frailty as her life ends and Gaara's despair is just too bittersweet. It's so sad! Still very lovely and poetic almost. Excellent one shot. ^^

omg... I ** loved it!

aw- that was so uber sad, but very well done- good job! ^^

wow...tats just so beautiful...is it oneshot?? poor gaara & hinata...

That's cute but you just had to make her die but it was still good
bye

So sad, but cute.
(I think I'm gonna cry)

Very good! Although, it's Kankuro, not Kankaru. Just pointing that out. This is so sad and cute at the same time. Keep it up.

T.S.O.H

it was really nice...i like it...why did hinata have o die?!(sobbing)poor gaara...