I've read this story already and just realized that I never reviewed it, so here.

Great story, great plot, perfect the way it is but I certainly wouldn't object if you ever chose to continue it. The plot bunny's been giving me weird looks for the past eight months! And frankly, the way you've written this story makes it perfectly believable as canon, minus the fact that even all the canon weirdness in Detective Conan would make it likely to happen. Magic Kaito, on the other hand, has magic as canon, so . . .

Anyway, ignore the random tangent above. Great story, and keep up the good work!

Very interesting take on it. I have to say, I like it, it's not often one comes across something quite like this. Personally, I'd hate to be immortal, things would get so boring. I liked the statistics at the end, and Kaito's magic tricks as he talks to Hakuba. It's sounds pretty logical, though I wonder how the syndicate got gem out of it all.

That was great! Short but sweet, not to mention reasonable and logical. All the facts fits to make the big picture. I do hope you make a sequel!

And that is how you screw with the gene pool: make someone immortal. Nice.

Cool. this was very cool. Such a unique idea.

*diesrevivesdiesrevivesdiesrevivesdiesrevivesdiesrevives*
omg, originality, tenpoints! writing style? FTW there is no unit to measure ur greatness! just, UNBELIEVABLE! i need to fav this and share it with everyone i know gods! *yes am so bowled over*

Oh man...now THAT is a twist. Jeeze...immortality really sucks, doesn't it? But Kaito doesn't want immortality. He's happy the way he is. I like this one. Makes you think. Hope to see more like this!

Certainly not something I expected, but totally excellent all the same, definitely better than I thought from the summary P_^
Would love a continuation, if you felt like you could *does the puppy-dog eyes*

Not what I was expecting. Better than what I was expecting.

Wow...That is definately...
wow.
Your writing style is amazing, and I would certainly love to see a follow up to this, though I know you're busy with A Good Offense, because this idea is really amazing, and I...well...I'm a sucker for Hakuba and Kaito friendship and/or pairing fics.

And the idea of Hakuba as Pandora is a brilliant one, plus the second to last paragraph, where you mentioned all the statistics of 'Pandora's life was very...I think touching is the right word for it...

And (please ignore the fact I keep starting my sentences with and, I know it's bad grammar) the way that they both seem friend-starved, I wonder, would the offer of friendship change Hakuba's reactions to Kaito in school? Does the fact he's Pandora have any other effect on him, other than immortality? Also, I really liked the characterisation, though that is sort of implied by what I've already said, I think, and Kid's story-telling plus sleight of hand makes a lot of sense, almost threatening in one sense, but also, by telling the story like it's happening to someone else, it also cushions the blow...maybe that's why it seems vaguely threatening? Because he's removed emotion from it? I don't know...
Anyway, I have rambled on far too long with this, and it sounds more like a letter than a review, so...
Thank you for the beautiful story! (I'm enjoying all your other stuff too, especially BD and Inconceivable, and I can't wait for another update. Well, I tell a lie, I can wait, I'm just vbery impatient.)
Again, brilliant story.

Please write some sort of continuation, it's such a wonderful idea!

Oh wow. That was unexpected and completely insane - and you made it seems perfectly sensible. Congratulations on a job well done. :)

Your writing is lovely.

Wow. Just wow.

Your ideas and your writing are completely off the wall. The ending is what I really liked, and it brings to mind Hakuba's obsession with time.

It's simply ... wow.

How awesome is that?! swet.

Awesome... and so possible. Although the thing that has always bothered me is; if someone (or thing) could cry immortality, where are the immortal(s) that they created, and let them know they could?

I hope you'll expand on this idea.