Thank you! A bit short but you write Xelloss wonderfully.

Excellent! It leaves me with all kinds of lovely, terrible ideas of what may happen - I won't call them plot bunnies because they are better left to the imagination, and this story is perfect just as it is.

how cheery. Great job.

Holy CRAP. That's ungodly creepy. But also really, really thought-provoking and nifty. And I do like the way you write Xelloss. ^^

Oh my! I really have to wonder just what kind of horrors Xellos has planned. It's funny, despite knowing just how evil he is, it's still so hard for me to think of him as a bad guy.

Oh WOW. I haven't watched or read Slayers in a long time, but you just brought back nice memories. This was a nice short fic that I really liked. I especially loved the ending!!

-Lyn

That's evil.

I like it. :>

Oh good work here, though it's a bit smaller than what I'm use to reading...

Wow, this was awesome. And perfect. And I have horrible little plotbunnies now thanks to this!

Great and unexpected end. Did not see that coming.

I'm almost tempted to request a sequal, but I don't want to ruin the perfection of the story.

Seriously-- awesome job on the fic.

And by evil, are you refering to Zelgadiss or Xellos?