|Reviews for Civilized|
| Shiro Ryuu 7/9/07 . chapter 1
Cool. I almost feel like I ought to read some Dostoevsky... maybe I'll just read some Stephan King instead _
| Sailor nova 1 5/30/07 . chapter 1
| Frannie1 5/7/07 . chapter 1
Good one. I like the last couple of sentences.
| That's What She Said 5/5/07 . chapter 1
Hmm...makes you wonder doesn't it? Nice one-shot, I really like the stories you write of Ben. You give the reader the chance to experience your idea of Ben's life. Great job.
| Malvolia 5/5/07 . chapter 1
Don't you love reviewers whose whole premise is "I don't get it," and then they think that necessarily means that it's the writer's problem?
I liked it. Which is possibly not any more valid than saying I didn't like it, but...oh well. The last sentence was especially good. And I like how you remind us that Ben has reading glasses. I hadn't thought about him reading without them before.
| Light at the End of the Tunnel 5/4/07 . chapter 1
i don't want to be mean, but i don't get the whole point of this story. If it was the first chapter of a longer story, i'd add it to my alerts because it's a GREAT beginning. I'd suggest using this as an introduction to a story of your own and somehow tie it in with his situation.