That was so depressing, but it was such an appropriate end! To write it that Kurama ends up with Hiei or Yuusuke seems a little too stereotypical (Hiei) or too optimistic (Yuusuke). I really like the way you brought the dream around full circle; for a while I thought it was an enemy attack. Great story!

OMG! Are you going to end like this? It's the most tragic fiction I've ever read. I know that this ending made sense a lot. But I still can't stand because my precious Kurama died. ToT You know I cried when I read this phrase

“Shh!” I shoot my sister a glare, staring coldly through the tears. “He said he wanted rest. You have to be quiet.”

Oh my poor Hiei. He's gone completely out of his mind. ToT

I love your fic so much even if it hurts me a lot.Cuz I like tragedy a lot. sigh* I'm looking forward to the crow's call pls update soon. I'm going to read another fic of yours.

OMG! this is the best tragity I have EVER read! I give it 10/10

That was a horribly sad ending!!
Poor Kurama-kun!
...liked the story though. really nice:)

The end is fair and square. Kurama died and he didn’t have to choose. Hiei and Yusuke surely will spend quite a lot of time to mourn and think about what they have done.

I think Hiei told Yukina to shut up because Kurama said he wanted to rest is tragic. He definitely out of his mind.

It ended perfectly…

Jesus effing *Christ*. You evil creature. I think I (temporarily) hate you.

That -- I don't know that I'm articulate enough right now to express the depths of my stun. That was the absolute worst way this love triangle could end -- with Kurama dead and neither of the other two to ever have him. I'm going to cry for a week.

That said, it was indeed a satisfactory wrap-up of the story. Somehow. o.o I have to go save a copy to my laptop so I can read it again in about half an hour...

Damn this is so sad, but also... perfect. i really really loved it. You did a really good work. Damn... I feel like crying poor Kurama. Really good.

OMG! such a sad ending! i knew this was going to happen! i di like your idea of making kurama die instead of choosing or having them both. it is rarely used. i did love the ending, even if it was sad. a perfectly well-written fic. you deserve more reviews! :-) thanks for the awesome fic and experience!! bye!

I think part of my heart...just died. This was beautiful. During the lead to his actual death I'm thinking 'A death ending? Will that leave it hanging and anticlimatic?' But I think that last line tied everything up beautifully, "In this moment, at least, they are brothers. That was just beautiful. I'm really sad this ended (and sad that both Yusuke AND Hiei are now alone and our lovely fox dead)

This was such a brilliant story and I loved every second of it and I think you made a right choice with the ending; not having him choose one over the other. And the picture you wrote of Hiei rocking in pain, crying was absolutely wonderful, and so emotional. It really was brilliant.

Thank you so much for this wonderful story, I am so very glad i read it ^^

Though I kind of expected Kurama's death, I'm still speechless...good job with the anguish.

It was EVERY bit as poignant, as beautiful, as heartwrenchingly sad as the first time around. And of course, the final line... just perfect to end this story.

BRAVA, again, my dear, BRAVA!!

Sniff...only one more chapter? But it seems like there's so much ground to cover? I honestly don't know who Kurama will end up with, if he even ends up with anyone. For some reason, I still have this ominous feeling - Hiei's dream did that to me.

I can't wait!

Ah, the lead-in to the climax of this beautifully poignant story. And it couldn't be a better one. You truly know how to write from your characters POVs -- keeping them all so IN character. You make the reader have sympathy for them; cheer them on; rant at them; etc. -- a wonderful feat for ANY writer.

You say 'one more chapter' HOW? well I am on the edge of my seat waiting...don't keep me sitting to long 'kay...please and thank you :)

Final chapter?! Damn! This chapter reminded me so much of the 'semi-formal wars' (semi-formal being what I assume to be the Australian equivilent of the junior prom...?) that are waging at my school /shudder. I'm boycotting them, not going! Peace to the rebels and all ^^
Waiting for that next chapter and I'll put in my vote for a HxK ending, though I'm sure it will hold no bearing on your end, either way I can't wait!! Please hurry /hugs.