Yay! On to the next, although I should really write this stupid essay >.<
Also, what does Martha look like? Apart from being short and fit I can't remember you describing more of her features.

That was a really nice end to the chapter :)

It would uncharacteristic for Batman to say, “Wow,” so he just thought it. -- awesome

“Her name isn’t Voldemort, you know. Nothing bad happens when you say it.”

Rofl.

You've reposted! Or something. I've been avoiding writing this silly essay by trawling through mostly pretty average batman fics and then I thought why am I doing this when I could reread your wonderful work! But you've lost all of your reviews! I'll try and make up for it. And Martha is right! Buffy IS the greatest superhero that never lived.

>Alfred followed him. As soon as the kitchen door swung closed, Bruce turned on the butler and demanded. “Are you seeing her behind my back?”
“Yes,” the old man retorted. “It’s true. There’s another woman.” Only Alfred could make him feel so ridiculous..<

LOL!

Why Alfred, you sure know how to play your cards ;)
*grins smugly*

And teehee, trust Superman's daughter to drive the Bat nuts!

WOW! An absolutely increadible story.
Plots are SOLID, EXCELLENT descriptions, Super dialog - GREAT action. I feel this is right on par with much of the professionally written science fiction I have read. It really brings forth the humanity as well as the SUPERhumanity of the heros we adore! 5 stars out of 5 stars. I'm glad I have the entire Trilogy to read, satisfaction with fiction comes sooner that way!
KUDOS!
'nuff said

just got to say...wow. this is definitely on par with the top of the fanfiction that i've read (and that has been MANY). keep writing, i'll keep reading.

This is absolutly amazing.

I love it, love it, love it.

One question, though: Are we to assume that those heroes close to the ones mentioned (Nightwing, Troia, Robin, Oracle, ect.) are dead?

Great story!

the first one was as good as the second. sorry i read them out of order, but in the end it was still ok. though it did clear up a few questions that i had from the second. but why does Lois not like Bruce/Batman? let know please, for mmy peace of mind.

calypso

What a warmhearted ending to a wonderful story. I kind of ran into these stories in a convoluted way and read the second and what you've written of the third before finding this one (don't ask), so summing up them all, I think you've done a great job at keeping the DC originals in character and have created some cool new ones. Your writing is comprehensive and creative and may I say as a former Nightwing fan that I really appreciate your depiction of an older Dick Grayson (in 2 & 3, not this one)as a family man instead of the unapologetic, self-enamored skank he's become in the comic books. Good luck, I look forward to reading the rest of your third one, which, wow, these characters have come a long way - and you've done it believeably.

-grin- Same old Bruce.

Cool, superman! And family. It's nice reading fics about him (or with him in it) in his later years when things are already established and you don't have to cringed at every embarassing moment.

If she's anything like her father, she'll never give up. :)

I liked this look into her work place, but it was too short.

Martha's character is fun to read about though, and very interesting to consider with all the apparent angles you've already shown for her.

I like it, this looks like an interesting story. The only thing that I hope you improve upon, is that it is slightly confusing. It has the feel of a story that should have a first part.

Like the interaction (or lack there of) between Batman and Martha Kent? It makes it seem like he knows her and dislikes her.

And there are a few things that are a little slack in details.

But I still think it looks really fun, and I can't wait to read more.