Pretty good. The idea is rather funny. There are a couple of things that annoy me through.
For a start, several words in your summary are misspelled. Also, Arc says that she’s “Jamaican” but there’s no Jamaica in Final Fantasy I. “exotic lady/dancer friend” seems somewhat odd in dialogue as one rarely pronounces dashes.
“I thought that it was going to kill me, but when it started to dun my way, it was enveloped in fira spell” What exactly do you mean with “dun”?
I personally am no big fan of using “Time, Place” to indicate a scene change. I prefer having the new scene described, but that’s just my opinion.
All in all, it’s a good story.