oh please continue this story it is so good! i can't stand the suspense!

I like this story. please continue with it.

Wow, this is great. Very interesting! I hope you get inspired again an upate soon! XD

Yes! I finally found a good Avatar fanfiction! Go you! I really REALLY hope you update soon!

you need to write more chaoters to this. This is good so far. :)

this is awesome. you have to write more soon!

More...more...more
FOAM!
BUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?

Wow...I really like the way you write. Have you ever considered writing professionally? Anyway, I like the plot. Update soon if you're still going with it!

TheRedBandit

I am really loving this so far and it's great that you're taking the challenge of writing a Tokka centric fanfic! (I honestly never thought I'd find one). I really like things such as Sokka thinking of Yue when the arranged marriage was mentioned and Katara hugging Aang over it because it just seems really in character. I also liked the confession part because I can see that happening, if she were to get rejected.

Can't wait to see more! :D

Nice start for a Tokka fic. All characters seem within character so nice job on doing that. Look foward to another update and soon. Peace!

I apologize for taking so long to review this first chapter of yours. You have been so kind as to drop in on my fan fic, so it is only fair, I think, for me to return the favor. It helps when it is an enjoyable favor to return.

I loved this first installment of your story. It is an interesting take on the future of the gAang. Everyone seems to be in character, even Toph, who, I imagine, would act very much like this given the situation she has found herself in. The confession scene in which she tells Sokka her feelings is almost heartbreaking. We, the reader, know the end result, but that does not take away the sting of it for either of them. That speaks well of your writing ability. Toph was Toph, and Sokka was Sokka, and that is a wonderful thing!

I am also pleased that you are writing Suki in a respectful manner. I may be a Tokka supporter, in my own way, but I like Suki, too, as well as Sukka. A lot of people do not do Suki all that well, which is a shame.

Well, I suppose that is long enough, for now. Keep up the great work! I am looking forward to another chapter.

Sifu Toph

wow! this is good! i love it!

yay!! TOKKA! XD ..I love tokka...and i love this story! :] please update soon! ^_^

This is pretty good. I didn't know you were an Avatar fan! To be completely honest, my preferences lie with the Sukka, Taang, and Zutara camps, but I try not to let such things get entirely in the way of my reviews. Especially when it's an author that has reviewed me before! Keep working, and I hope to see the next chapter of Legends Never Die soon!

Hm... interesting...poor Toph she has ta get married...

Seems like a interesting story, and I can't wait to see what happens next...Pretty well written but you should probably vary your sentance length. Cuz reading a whole story of long sentances gets kinda boring. So try writing a bunch of long sentances then throwing in a short one. It gets your readers attention and keeps them focusing on the story. I liked your descriptions though, especially the one of Toph. She sounds very pretty. Well can't wait for you ta post another chapter, I'll be waiting...

And if you like, you can read one a my Avatar fics, I've got 3. But then I dunno cuz they're pretty sad...

Oh yeah, in our story can Toph be short and volumptuos (sorry if I spelled that wrong) instead of petite? Cuz I wanted to make Toph and Katara complete opposites, an I can so imagine her still being short and curvy, but not fat, curvy!