 KellansLadyKatie09 2009-03-12 . chapter 23Once again reviewing on this story because I love it so much!! One of my favorites of all time and I reread it on your site all the time :)
I am so glad that David is no longer hurting Lexa, I had an ex like that and my friend Lexa loves it that someone else says Alexis like that lol.
Loved it! :)
Katie |
 DimmDimms 2008-10-28 . chapter 23What an amazing story! Very unique. Thank you! |
 powderedsugar 2007-12-28 . chapter 23this story is by far the most beautifully written story that i have ever found on fanfiction. the descriptions were amazing and the lot was well thought out and well described. absolutely my favourite story ever |
 Dragon-of-Luck 2007-06-30 . chapter 23AWESOME stroy! I loved every word of it. Will be on the look out for a sequal. |
 iluvmyphantom 2007-06-14 . chapter 23aw! that was beautiful!! what i twist i wasn't expecting her to become one as well, i was hoping she wouldn't but this may help her understand erik more!
wonderful story!! i do hope you write more stories tehe |
 Mystic Lady Fae 2007-06-12 . chapter 23OMG, you must write another story! Preferably a sequel to "Veil," because I've been waiting forever for it! Please?! |
 Nyasia A. Maire 2007-06-11 . chapter 23Hi!
Sigh!
"Kiss the Cook"? LOL!
Lexa's naughty..."If we did, I wouldn't need a second?" Just as it should be, too!
Well, congrats on a fine story. Although, if you consider doing a sequel, perhaps, you should consider one that delves into the mystery of Erik's ancestor that started the line of panthers. Erik and Lexa as Sherlock Holmes and (a sexy, not old maid) Miss Marple. Just one of those errant bits of strangeness that cross my mind from time to time.
Now that you have completed "The Killing Moon," I would like to extend an invitation to you to read my first fan fiction, "Christine dans Deux," which is complete and my second, "The Perfect Solution," which is in progress. Both stories have subplots of a supernatural nature and I would be interested in hearing your opinion if you have the time.
Again, congratulations on a job well done!
Brava! Brava! Bravissima!
Fondest wishes,
--ny |
 Scourge of Amaranth 2007-06-11 . chapter 23Yay! And at the same time... --sniffs-- it's over...
This was a brilliant fanfiction! Definitely a favorite! I'll be watching for another! Animal-human hybrids have always been a fetish of mine... they're so fun to read, and the interpretation of changing and control is so varied! They're also quite fun to write... because generally, they're powerful... and it's always fun to write powerful characters. Anyways, that little rant aside, point is: it's awesome that you've made your Erik a panther-man, and your descriptions, reasonings, and explanations involving how/why it happened and what the affects are are quite unique.
~IGC t DM |
 Timeflies 2007-06-11 . chapter 23Sniff, it is over and I will miss it too. I like how you ended it with him learning to be with people. I wondered if she would accidentally have some of his blood, so you did it. Thank you for the story. |
 alatariel10 2007-06-11 . chapter 23Aww. A cute end to an amazing story. Keep writing, you're good at it! :D
~Lauren |
 liVe-yOur-fAntasY 2007-06-11 . chapter 22awl i loved this story! Update the last chapter soon!! |
 Nyasia A. Maire 2007-06-10 . chapter 22Hi!
Oh yes! Very delightful! Made me wish that Erik's hardness was an ability that all men shared with him in the real world.
Sigh!
I laughed over Lexa's mentioning a muzzle as my husband has threatened me with one at times. (I like to bite - not hard enough to draw blood, but hard enough, I guess. Don't ask me why as I have no idea.) :)
Wish you could draw the story out one more chapter by continuing their little game...
More, please?
--ny |
 AngelEyes0841 2007-06-10 . chapter 22Oh I'm so happy they are together now!! I can't wait for your last chapter to be up!! It's a little sad the story is pretty much over. You did such a wonderful job with the story!! I loved the whole panther & the killing moon...thinking out of the box. Can't wait to see what else you might write about. Always keep up the great work!!
~Your Faithful Reviewer~ |
 iluvmyphantom 2007-06-09 . chapter 22AW soon to an end all good things end to quickly i must say lol oh well i'll be looking forward to the ending chapter and more of your stories
this was one sexy love scene woo! get a bit scared there when lexa wnats to bite him.. i can feel their hearts stopping; so tense, that wonderful writing! |
 Scourge of Amaranth 2007-06-08 . chapter 22Beautiful chapter. I can't wait for the epilogue... although it's rather sad that this is ending. I do hope you make a sequel.
~IGC t DM |