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Reviews For: Death Conscience

ShadowTeenGirl
2007-05-11
ch 2,
abuseInteresting story, hoped to hear another one.
HAZMOT
2007-05-06
ch 2,
abuseI was really getting into this story, and yet it was over too soon. I hope you continue longer stories. You have a great concept of drawing people in, but let them savior your drama, otherwise this was a good read. :D
Raigeki
2007-05-06
ch 2,
abuseAphrodite was dead on! great work with her character!

i enjpyed the plot, and good concept. but you rushed it. It was over too fast for the reader to really get drawn in.

otherwise it was great! keep writing more stuff, i love it ^_^.
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