This is a good start to what looks like it will be a very good story. You should keep it up.

I've spotted many inconsistencies but I'm still interested in where this will go.

This is slash, yes?...hmm...I wonder what the pairing will be (if it's obvious...uh...I'm slow?)
This story is good...I really like the male Witch idea. It would be nice if I knew a bit more about the differences between what the Blood do and the spells Etienne uses...=)
I can't wait for the next chapter...

A male Witch...interesting. Please update soon...this storyline is tugging at my mind =)
So, does this mean that Jaenelle is dead?

I'm intrigued. Please keep writing. You've raised quite a few questions, some already raised by other reviewers. When is this taking place?, what kinds of ages are Daeren and Draemar? Did you realise that towards the end of the story you renamed Daeran Daren? Tell us more, soon please!

Interesting...I love the Dark Jewel Trilogy and the idea of a Male Witch is different...I can't wait to read the next Chapter.

I'm confused. Earth is one of the Realms, and Etienne is descended from Jaenelle? Very interesting begining! WRITE MORE SOON!

Your story is very interesting. Don't think I've read one like it. I really like it.

Draemar is a female Eyrien, right. Then wouldn't her name end in 'an' and not 'ar'? Cause 'ar' is the male ending for an Eyrien. I just wanted to point that out, but of course you might have meant to do that and have a reason for it that will be explained later.

Looking forword to your next update.

this story caught my eye and now i want to know where it is heading. its a bit confusing though. How did etienne know someone was coming for him? the dreams? i hope it become clear. anyways i look forward to the next chapter