i loved it! it was really good, and i loved the end w/ 2 of my favorite songs! that was really good, keep up the good writing!! kudos!

gosh bizz, i still cant get over how good you are at writng. ah, well, i suppose i should have said lilliane, but i know ur bizz so im gonna call you biz. hahaha. so anyways i love ur story and i know ur not gonna get much constructive critism from me cuz im not very good at that kinda thing and besides, i think its PERFECT! so adios mi amiga.

loveloads, k

write more update itz good

Oh my god. Classic case of hearing the wrong thing at the wrong time. Poor Edward.

Oh yeah, kudos at the end for the RENT song, "Goodbye Love." I also thought of that song as I read New Moon.

This is pretty good! Of course, I almost wanna hit Edward for being so wrong, but the angst is os strong! And RENT!

Wow.

I am very impressed. Where as a fanfiction like this could have been corny, it just wasn't. It was amazing how you somehow made his emotions accessible.

I loved it! Keep writing, you have a talent!

-WR

Yay! It's so nice and angsty! And it has a RENT quote at the end!