*sob*

Poor Kokoro... I feel sorry for her...

I hope you'll updates soon, I want to know what happened to her after she was befriended by Ai as well as what happens after she finishes recounting this tail.

Ja ne,
~Rain Crystal~

HI AGAIN THIS CHAPTER WAS AWESOME AND I LIKED IT VERY MUCH. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I CAN'T WAIT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. BYE UNTIL NEXT TIME PLEASE UPDATE THANK YOU.

cool! So that's how she was kidnapped... can't wait till you update! XD

HI THIS STORY AND CHAPTER WAS REALLY GOOD AND I LIKED IT VERY MUCH. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I CAN'T WAIT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. BYE UNTIL NEXT TIME PLEASE UPDATE THANK YOU.

this is so good

Great Chapter, update soon!
-Fennecfox03

wow! Who would ahve thoguth that Kabuto liked her too! XD

What will happen next?

Can't wait to find out what happens! Update Soon.
-Fennecfox03

Wow! This seems really good! Update soon! I want to see what happens next!

Great Chapter. I'll be looking forward to more chapters from you.
-Fennecfox03

Very interesting Story, I will be wondering how it turns out...
-Fennecfox03

This story sounds like a good idea in da making...Keep it going!

Awe, very good. I love the story it's very imaginative! But the storyline hasn't been clarified that well, and the story is going too fast. I mean this has GREAT potential, and you're a very good writer, but I think we need more background on the female character, and what happened previously to make Orochimaru want her.

Keep up the good work ^^