Very nicely done, though I hope it was a bit longer. SI is one of my favourite of the Ultima series and I really wish there are more fics about it.
Btw, I have read your other fics as well and I really liked your avatar (Elora). I'm so looking forward for your U9 fic. I'm sure it'll be interesting to see the events of Ultima 9 from her pov...

Enjoyable snippets. I always liked Serpent Isle best so it was a fun read.

I was also happy to see that you are planning on writing a U9 fic. That is beyond awesome! Looking forward to that. Thanks!