FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Rokulare 2007-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseYou've gotten better since I last read your work! Not to say your work was bad. You know what I mean. Anyway, very... ugh. I'm not going to say cute here. Very nice? No, I say that enough already. Very interesting? That's like saying it's special... It's good, anyway! Only thing I see is that you're lacking a space between "in King's case" and the line about Sue getting sick of it. |
| Skylark Starflower 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseIt is indeed cute. ^_^ I like it. Good job. |