I love your use of words! Make more! And the story was nice!

I haven't been on here for a while, but I had to go check up on your stories.

And I am incredibly impressed!

I think I almost cried during this fic. The metaphor was perfect, solid, and touching.

Basically, what I'm trying to say is, I love it to pieces. Every line of this story made me feel.

Amazing job!

Wow... I think I was confused half the time, and my brain is still slow, but I thought it was a good one! Nice metaphors! Heheheh!

wow another beautifully written one-shot!

Damn, that was good. A big giant metaphor, yet it makes sense. And such a beautiful dedication.

Lovely story. The sea, island and mainland metaphors were all just so perfect. The story has a lovely poetic feel, but, at the same time, the meaning is still clear. And, that's something I much appreciate as I'm one of those people who often just doesn't "get" metaphor, or poetry for that matter.

This was really sweet..I loved it...the imagery was wonderful!

Very nice writing style. Period. I like poetic like delivery and devices, you use the parts of speech well, metaphors and what not. I'm happy to say you are now one of my favorite authors.

That was so cool. What an interesting concept. I really like how the land was a lady, and it fit so much into the story at the same time. Simply amazing. Keep up the good work!