I liked the juxtaposition of her family life with the old memories of Bill. It's so hard to let go of someone you love, even when they've tried to kill you in the past (actually, then it might be harder) and you get that across so wonderfully. Great job!

I like your summary at the top. It's intriguing. Have you thought of using it for your summary for your story-the one that's shown on the KB page. I enjoyed what you wrote so far. I like how you had Beatrix change her name to "Laura" to reflect on her new life. I like your details from the movie such as mentioning Budd leaving her in the lonely grave. Nice to see that she still runs the used record store as if in memory of Tommy. I look forward to reading more. :)

You've got me interested. I'll be watching for your updates. I really got into it when you started reflecting on the past. They were very well done, especially for being short. I envy smooth transitions.