 defray 2008-06-08 . chapter 4I loved this so much!
I've always been intrigued by the idea of a human "playing god," and I think if anyone was to do it, Kaiba Seto would be the perfect candidate. I love the way you portrayed him in this, describing his qualities at the beginning of each chapter, and then the events in the chapter reinforcing those qualities.
Kaiba and Bakura together was very intense... especially the ending bit about how "God will see better when his Eyes return," but you can tell that they trust each other. The Malik and Yami no Malik banter was very amusing and had a lot of foreshadowing.
I like the way you've sort of made the cast into a secret group working under Kaiba. I would love to see other characters in this, such as Yami no Yuugi, Jounouchi, Isis, etc.
If you ever have the urge to come back to this, definitely do so. I'll read it. =D |
 Erik's Champion 2008-03-14 . chapter 4This is interesting. Dark and rather disturbing, but interesting none the less. The entire premise is very creative, and I think being God is a role that Seto is very well suited for, though it seems more in his mind than anyone else's. |
 wallsmex 2007-06-06 . chapter 2Oh...WOW.
I READ THIS ON LJ, and LOVED it. I read it over at least thrice and now I'm rereading because it's just that awesome. I love you writing style; it's so different, and it works.
*FAV* |
 Shadow over Egypt 2007-05-21 . chapter 2...This is...new... (stunned) It's a completely different style to what I'm used to reading, and it's a brand new plot so, well- WOW. It did pretty much render me speechless, but just one thing? PLEASE make the chapters longer. ;p |
 t-me 2007-05-21 . chapter 2Ok, I have no idea what’s going on but I’m still interested in seeing what happens. |
 lotus head 2007-05-21 . chapter 2Gyaa~ this fic is so amazing! It's still so confusing... but I think I'm starting to figure it out a bit. D: I'm the only reviewer? |
 lotus head 2007-05-05 . chapter 1Wow... that was SO COOL. It was so cool, I can't even tell what I like about it... I dunno. But that was really awesome. ^^; |
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