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ayame_81131
2009-06-15 . chapter 4
Could you please,please,please,update?! I just love your stories
CrystallicPrincess
2008-05-13 . chapter 1
I love that style of writing! I agree that it's really tough to write, but still, quite a challenge and it's quite good! ^-^
Mikiri's Revenge
2007-12-26 . chapter 4
YAY! reminds me of the times my friends and i talk before i was forbidden to be on the internet because of obbsessive fanfic reading...
taida
2007-10-10 . chapter 4
I love you. Both of you. I seriously do. This Letter Game is genious! I love you, Melantha, and whoever co-writes this story with you! Update soon!!
Neko-Graphic
2007-09-16 . chapter 4
HAH! cute >.
Impaling Muffins
2007-08-16 . chapter 4
Nice story ^_^
A.D. Grey
2007-06-11 . chapter 4
Very good. You must update soon. It is very good so far.
Kristine.D
2007-06-03 . chapter 4
Well I can definitely see this story improving, however, a couple of notes:

1 - Grammar. Huge thing that's really lacking in this story. Wrong capitalization and paradox sentencing.

2 - Characters are not really in character. On the surface I suppose they could seem in-character, however, I think you need to analyze each character's personality. Especially Tenten. Her character needs a lot of work.

3 - Try to not capitalize phrases and sentences- it just bugs readers, like me, hella lot.

4 - Story development. This story is only in it's fourth chapter and I can already feel the storyline being rushed here. Albeit this is in e-mail form thus time moves by quicker in this story, but I feel like the romance factor (especially ShikaIno) is being rushed. Slow it down.

-Kristine X3-
xladykittyx
2007-06-03 . chapter 4
i love this story!
raebird223
2007-06-03 . chapter 4
luv the story so far but y r sakura's emails shorter than ino's? o well and i think wut sasuke did was really cute hehe update soon
The Probable Future
2007-06-03 . chapter 3
Hehe,this is really good!Why is Sasuke so mean?
colonelZ
2007-06-02 . chapter 4
ah...so annoying...i'm reading this really amazing and unique story that I found while going through the resently up dated sasusaku section and i get really into and reach chapter four, only to find that there aren't any more chapters! UPDATE SOON! YOUR STORY IS AMAZING!
Kawaii Kunoichi Genius
2007-05-15 . chapter 3
wow i'm loving the story!
dats a really cool idea...the whole letter thing.
omg i hope things work out between sakura n sasuke...and i wonder how the whole neji and hinata thing is gonna be (oh this is gonna be good!)

plz update soon!
i wanna know more!

love KKG ^_^
Kristine.D
2007-05-10 . chapter 3
Interesting story plot, and I like the blooming romance. Anyways, I think you need to work on your grammar and sentence structures. Although I understand that this is in e-mail form, it should still have proper grammar. I'll be waiting for an update.

-kristine X3-
A.D. Grey
2007-05-09 . chapter 3
OH MY GOD! I love this fanfic so much. You want to know why? Because you included Colorado in it. Nobody ever includes Colorado in anything! People don't really ever pa attention to it. So, whenever I read something that includes Colorado I get all happy, cause I'm from Aurora, Colorado. Very good so far. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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