My favorite was the first chapter. The second was good too, but very short.

The Akikaku-ness is cute, I like it...and the idea of Akizuki returning, too. I was also planning on making one where he returns, as well..but, Im more going to focus on akizuki and kaku...you dont mind? I just don't want one to think I used another's idea so much*is obviousuly still a fanfic-writing newbie*