i love this story it is one of the best katoph storys out there.

I stumbled across this on DA and thought that I picked it up here, so imagine my surprise that I hadn't. This story fully deserves the praise it receives. Although the characters present slightly different aspects to those seen in the show, I find it adds to the story instead of detracting from it and the interactions between Toph and Katara are fantastic to read. Thank you for sharing it here!

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! PLEASE RIGHT MORE!

this is really good! this was awesome ! *favs*

This was... I don't know if I can even find adequate words. It was touching and masterfully written at the least. And, gods, but it makes me jealous of Katara haha

This has got to be the most romantic thing I have ever EVER read. Even beyond Avatar fan fictions. I was so amazed when I read this. Perfect!

oh my god, how sweet is that!
my fav storie...

Hey, it's been a while since you have posted anything on DevArt.. and the last thing said you were having some problems, so I hope it's all working out for you, and that you are doing okay. This fic is really great, I've read it a bunch of times and it's still one of my favorites. I hope everything works out for you, take care of yourself.

-A Worried Fan

Wow.. That was great. I really, really liked it.. more than anything I have read in years.

I partially agree with what Caladbolg said in a few cases, but for the most part I like your writing style, and I think the words you use help to make the reader understand Katara's position. Like swirling down rapids of sensation, it's confusing and disorienting, but there is so much desire pulling you under it feels overwhelming. And yet it works.. so well. ^^'

Also, Lalek seems seriously angry. It's okay Lalek, I'm sure someone loves you.. somewhere. Seriously though, what a useless critic, he doesn't even give you any constructive advice.

Sorry I suck at reviews, but I think this fic is really good, and I hope you end up making that sequel.

Dude you so need to make a sequel to this it was utterly brilliant and beautifully writen.

awesome. totally romantic, without the extreme fluff. I absolutly loved it. keep writing.

~dreamer

This is so sweet and awesome!

I love your fic, you did well.^-^

Very beautiful, though I do agree with Caladbog in that it was a little thick. But like I said, VERY beautiful

This is a incredible piece of work!